| "Truly, Desperately" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Title: Naruto's help and Gaara
Reviewed By: Sandragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that naruto can help sakura sort the shit out thats in her head he's helpfull in that way ya know? it would be awsome if you keep gaara in the story I know he's suposed to return to suna but I think it would ad an intristing twist to things.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't worry u won't give me any more brain damage then i already have. lol! :) any way if u keep on leaving me hangging like this i just might get an aneurisum! i try to figure out what u may have up ur sleave next, but i well never understand how ur little crazy evil mind works no matter how hard i try. lol. well PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!! I NEED TO KNW WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!!
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Reviewed By: -Satans Spawnishly Daughter- [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 15:58 CDT
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XD yes poptarts just sneak up and jump on ya! well gots bad news me being the dumbass i am i slammed a door into a teachers face...litterally and destroyed half a classroom! so i got suspended and somehow i was already suspended earlier this week or something SO I GOT GROUNDED FOR A FUGGIN MONTH!! NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!..well i found a way around it mostly i got my ipod taken aaway and for about a day the computer too but i convinced my mom to let me still write stories n shit...OH WELL! ima update youre selling me soon and same with twins! ya gotta update soon too!
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Reviewed By: LusterBlossom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 23:22 CDT
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Oopsie ^^; [Insert in last review] My LEAST favorite part of the chappie was that Sakura and Naruto were SUPER close to kissing. 50 thumbs down! =( My FAVORITE part was when Sakura wanted to depend on Sasuke and Naruo was acting like a bitch. 50 thumbs UP! =)
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Reviewed By: LusterBlossom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love Ch. 15!! :U. Other then that it was great!! 5 thumbs up. Lol thanks ^^ I just thought of a random user name and my cousin gave me this one sooo yeah. ^^ and Wow...So she would have to get with Gaara...and Shukaku...but...I don't know just do your thing! XD
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Reviewed By: -Satans Spawnishly Daughter- [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 11:43 CDT
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lmfao!!! twins will get better ima update the others...eh...when i get outta bed before 2 pm XD ill update and how i have a dramatic scene set up for ya! -coughs- OMFG YOU UPDATED OMG! IMA HAVE A FUGGIN HEART ATTACK!!!! X___X -faints- lmao it was a temptation and yes i feel high XD
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's o.k. if u took long! better late then never, right? anyway i liked the chap it was really good! and yes, u r SO evil leaving me to think so hard bout what's going to happen!!!! MEANIE! lol! well UPDATE SOON!!! I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!!!
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: Sandragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it when gaaras all psyco. mwahahaha. I realy liked it when naruto got all pissed off I can relate to the way he's fealing.
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Reviewed By: -Satans Spawnishly Daughter- [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 16:10 CDT
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aaawww garshdarnit! i like being crazy! XD that sucks i hate term papers ya start earlier then i do..shit i start on the day its due! ima update on sakura uchiha and twins soon youre selling me will take longer but ill get it posted up
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Reviewed By: -Satans Spawnishly Daughter- [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 18:16 CDT
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hiyaz! i started a new story called twins..but i only got the prelude up right now check it out okay! its kinda like a half sakura story half OC...but whatever! hope ya like it! o_O"" by the way...UP DATE DAMNS CHU!!!!!!!!!!! DX
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Title: Zakura and Gaara
Reviewed By: Sandragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the interactions betwen Gaara and Zakura. great chapter as allways.
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Reviewed By: -Satans Spawnishly Daughter- [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 12:03 CDT
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lmao! this chappie kicks ass too! well dont they all? sakura got into a fight with pakkun XDDD this is fuckin great! ill update soon i just got over a flu gawd how i can still be sick with nothin in my stomach is beyond me @_@
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i didn't review for the last chap! it was cuz my comp has been retarded and i haven't been able to do anything so ya. well any way i really liked both chaps and i can't wait to read more!!! SO UPDATE SOON MY EVIL LITTLE AUTHOR FRIEND! LOL! WELL I LOVED IT!!! P.S. I STILL WANT SASUKE TO END UP WITH SAKURA!!!
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Reviewed By: LusterBlossom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=O Great chappie ^-^ and Wow never expected Zakura to like Gaara! XD Nice twist but Naruto seems to be ignoring her and when Sasuke goes soft she gets mad XD lol.
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Reviewed By: -Satans Spawnishly Daughter- [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 17:47 CDT
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lmao!!! ill update and YOU keep on updatin too! this story PAWNS!!!!! even pawns more than the pacmans my friends keep sending around in a chatbox XD ill try n keep outta the nut house but i might go back in -twitches- they got me on an HOUR LONG FUCKING BUS RIDE TO MY FUCKING SCHOOL! EVERYONE HATES ME ON THAT BUS SIDES A FEW PEOPLE..-cries- moving on...-coughs- eh i donno how to make my story funny no more but i think ima post up another "story" on here that i have on fanfic its all about the akatsuki ANNOYING THE HELL OUTTA THEM!!! itll be gggrreeeaaatttt XD yer cool too keep updatin!
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