| "A Latent Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 01:03 CST
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Start running woman. that was the mother of all cliffies you just dumped on us. I hope you're at your keyboard writing. LOL. Keep it up. DD
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 10:59 CST
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Oh, wow. I'm not so confused anymore... I like this a lot. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hopefully it wasnt naraku.. hm..... ~Sessh- i dont like the way u think wench. (meaning tba) ~lil sessh- wat am i doing here? ~ tba- grabbs lil sessh into her arms- ur sooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!! -kisses his forhead- ~ lil sessh- blushes- ~ sessh- that is a sign of weakness. that is why 'this' sesshomaru is stronger than u. ~ lil sessh- i have something u dont though. ~ sessh- looks at him- and wat is that? ~ lil sessh- tba. ~ tba- hugs him- sesshomaru i think u should act a little bit more like him. ~ sessh- he is me!!!!!!!!! ~tba- yeah. but a smarter and cute you. ~ kagome- how ironic. ur paents always did say that the younger u are the smarter u are. and that the older u get the dumber u get. ~ sessh- this sesshomaru is smarter than a little child. ~ tba- u know u called ur self a child right? ~ sessh- uh.. this sesshomaru is very well aware. ~ tba-... anywayz. i think lil sesshy's sounds so cute in the story.i wonder if kagome could actully spend some time with him and then he could learn to trust her. then when he turns back he might tell her y he trys to 'kill' inuyasha. and y he insists calling inuyasha his little brother if he hates him so much. and y he hates humans. -hugs lil sessh- im keeping him. ~ sessh- ....... as long as u have a new hobby. ~ kags- wat is her hobby any way? ~ sessh- shiver- looking up ways to annoy me. she got up to 97. ~kags- did she try them yet? ~ tba- o yea. last week i stole his clothes when he was bathing and replaced them with- ~ sessh- uh... -anime sweat drops- bye! and uh... update soon! bye! ~ tba- wait! im not finished! ~ sessh- uh yeah u are! -turns camera off- ~fin... ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: iluvinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good!!!! Its such a great story!! Its my favorite one that I've read so far and I've read quite a few. Please hurry up and write the next chapter :) Its a masterpiece
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 05:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, give me MOOOORE! I'm totally addicted to this story. You have to quit your day-time job and become a full-time fanfic writer! ;) Gimme more more more more MORE!!! Hurry up and update! :D
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 14:57 CST
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OMG This is getting to be so amazing, I can't wait for the next update! Wow, Kagome has really screwed up this time. Great job!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 11, 2008 21:04 CST
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Cliff hanger ending AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I love this story. It can get a bit confusing, but it is well written and is well thought out.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 18:00 CST
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eek!! kagome needs to find that subjugation necklace and soon!! *grabs a rolled up newspaper and smacks inuyasha over the head with it* bad dog! bad bad bad inuyasha!! FL
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 02:56 CST
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This story is amazing, wonderful, stupendous! I'm in awe of how you were able to play with the time-line in such a well thought out, linear fashion yet is still so fanciful. The recreation of events is intriguing to follow and I'm still wondering what caused what and how all these changes will manifest in the future. I'm a bit worried about chibi-sess just because it becomes inane in so many fics but from the writing talent I've seen displayed so far in this story I'm sure you've got something cool planned there. Anyhow, keep up the good work, I'm excited to see what you come up with next. Ciao
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha! sesshy turned into a little person! ha ha ha!; sessh- it is not respectful to make fun of this sesshomaru. that is, if u still wish to live. ; tba- put a sock in it! u wouldnt kill me; sessh-evil smirk- u have no idea of wat this sesshomaru is capable of; tba- go ahead and kill me. remember im 'theblackangels_' its supposed to be theblackangel. which means death. i pick tba 4 short. im just gonna come back anywayz.; sessh- u are truly annoying; tba- so are u jerk!; sessh-i would rather be stuck in a cave with the miko for a year then spead a day with u; tba- is that a challange?;sessh- maybe.;kag-do i have a say in this?;both-no.;kag- i choose the one that doesnt include sessh;tba- we just said u have no say in this.;sessh- im gone. ; kag-me too.;tba-watever. oops lost track of time! it rocks and i hope u update soon. -takes rope- im gonna need this to get sesshomaru..-disappears in the shadows-
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 01, 2008 18:40 CST
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Talk about different. I am at a loss of words...the story is great, well written, and there is a kiddie Sesshoumaru. I really am looking forward to seeing which direction the story is going to take. Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 12:28 CST
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ooh!! not fair, another cliffhanger. darn. ya kagome really did make BIG mess of things. lol. tisk tisk. can't wait for the next chapter. FL
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahahahhaa XD Priceless! How unexpected! Will Kagome go back to the future and try again, or will she try to find the cure to his curse? (at least he still has both arms this time) And where on earth did Inuyasha go? Oh please please PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: rhyvin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 14:46 CST
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chibiko sesshoumaru!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very clever plot that makes me want to scream. I can't believe Kagome has to relive all the events with the jewel. Or maybe she does not need to break it this time if she just makes sure that certain people are reunited, so to speak. Being a total Sesshoumaru/Kagome fan I hope that she does not fix the time line to become Inuyasha's mate. This is because the same problem would exist, except the pinning would be for Kikyou. Of course, Kagome would not incite her offspring to murder Kikyou, so that would be different also. However, I think that Inuyasha's affections are flawed when it comes to Kikyou and Kagome for the reason that he cannot distinguish between the two enough to select to spend his life with one and let go of the other. Inuyasha needs to find someone else to love IMHO. I always love your original character Akiyama (I assume).
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