| "Returning Evil" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mikona On: August 16, 2002 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good fic, keep it up ;-) |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Sekura On: August 14, 2002 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, continue more soon. |
Reviewed By: Rachel On: July 27, 2002 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a pretty good fic, considering that it's your first but it doesn't seem to be moving very fast. I think you should add more action and love scenes, but I do like it and will continue to check up on it |
Reviewed By: chibi-minako On: July 27, 2002 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story alot because it's very original and has LOTS of detail! you are a great writer and you should post some more, i'll look forward to new chapters!! |
Reviewed By: Hiyako On: July 20, 2002 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GUUURRRRR-AAATTEEEEE STTOOOREEEEIIIIII!!! Ie canint spuhel!! Cuntinyoo ppoooollleeeezz!!! |
Reviewed By: Ashima On: July 20, 2002 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, please continue more soon |
Reviewed By: Hiyatamo On: July 20, 2002 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, please do more and I look forward to reading it! I like what happening. So, there's more to deal with now, huh? Poor guys, they never get a break! Well, I think you could add a little bit more romance, but so far, I am really liking it! |
Reviewed By: Evil Kitty On: July 20, 2002 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY IS GREAT!!! I LOVE IT AND IF YOU DON'T CONTINUE YOU WILL PAY! MWAHAHA!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT????? DO MORE AND I WILL CONTINUE TO READ AND REVIEW!!! I LOVE THE WAY YOU ELABORATE ON EVERYTHING!!!! THE STORY IS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! PEACE! |
Reviewed By: Niriko-Mun On: July 04, 2002 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!! MUST SEE MORE!!! WHATS HAPPEN TO TAKA?! AHHHHHH!!!! "Cause Niriko-Mun said so!" |
Reviewed By: Preluding Sama On: July 04, 2002 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great third chapter, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Reena On: July 02, 2002 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah..it's an okay story. I like it and hope more is soon to come. |
Reviewed By: Con Chu On: July 02, 2002 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story, hope you write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Niriko-Mun On: July 01, 2002 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I'll be waiting for more! "Cause Niriko-Mun said so!" Bye-bye! |
Reviewed By: Sekuya On: July 01, 2002 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this chapter was really good, I'm just in a bad mood today so I didn't give good rates cause it makes me feel better! haha...that's mean of me! Keep writing though! bye! |
Reviewed By: Preluding Sama On: July 01, 2002 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up. |
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