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Reviewed By: Frankie (form Canada) On: January 14, 2008 13:19 CST
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Hey! *nibbles on a cookie* Whats up? This thing was kewl!! With a capatal Creative!! So how did you think this up? Oh well, you work in mysterious ways (just like your fav. animal) Oh and when are you going to come up? I miss you! ;__; Hope to see you soon. Oh and for that person who is trying to black mail you, (Fuc* OFF!!) >____< L8erz! ^__^
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Title: XP
Reviewed By: you know who I am On: January 14, 2008 11:17 CST
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You really took your time to drag this out, didn't you? -__- WE KNOW YOU HAVE UP TO CHAPTER 18 WRITEN!! POST 'EM!!!! NOW!!!! Or i'll tell everyone here your biggest secret!! XD yuo know i would!!! SO POST 'EM!!! Also, very creative, she sounds just like you (hint hint) you do fall alot.... 9__9 yesh....just post the chapters
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Reviewed By: Zero 101 (Hi!) On: January 12, 2008 19:28 CST
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*claps hands* Very, very good. I'm very happy at knowing Ookami's past and trying to imagine Shaq hugging and Oompa Loopa IS odd! So she's leaving huh? Poor guys, they'll be crushed. -.- Can't wait until the next chapter. Later! :D
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Title: Whoops...
Reviewed By: Zero 101 (Hey!) ^-^ On: January 08, 2008 17:14 CST
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Ooops, it seems that you've managed to post the same chapter twice. Oh well, it happens to everyone. ^^; Very nice chapter, poor Captain beleives that he killed her. The German phyciatrist was too funny! Baku: You thought he was funny?! He was flat out annoying! XO Me: Yes, and how does that make you feeellll? >:) Baku: *throws his hands up* Gaaa, you frustrate me!!!! T__T++ Very nice chapter and I can't wait until the next one. Oh, and thanks for leaving me a reveiw on 'I Hate My Name' and your idea sounds great. I'll include it in my next chapter and of course give you props for it! Later! ^3^
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Title: Ummmm...
Reviewed By: Sayla On: January 08, 2008 07:48 CST
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Umm, you've posted a chapter twice.
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Reviewed By: Zero 101 (who has litterally just seen 'Sweeny Todd'!) On: January 03, 2008 18:16 CST
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Sorry for the late reveiw, nice chapters. The poor girl was sooo confused, not knowing where you came from must be a terrible thing. And I can't beleive CAPTAIN killed her!!! X( Whoops, it happens...Sometimes... I hope Kao Lynn can fix her. Oh, and I liked how you broke the tension in there, made me laugh and no, I used a barf bag and not the floor. Just letting you know that I used you advice. Very good chapters and I can't wait to see what happens next. Cheers! ^^
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Title: Here's that 2nd reveiw you wanted!!!!
Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 20:01 CST
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I got soooo caught up with the newest chapter that I forgot to compliment you older one. Ookami's nightmare sounded pretty horrifying, I mean imagine your friends killing you. I couldn't, guess I'll never see my friends the same way ever again. Hey, wait a second! Madnug is tricking her, oh no! I hope Ookami can see what this baddy is up to. :l
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Reviewed By: Zero 101 (Hey!) ^-^ On: December 18, 2007 18:38 CST
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Oh my God, Ookami totally dominated the Dark Axis in under five minutes! I liked Sazabi's comment 'you're lower than Zapper in this food chain', very funny! :) So will our gundam heros beable to rescue her? Can't wait until the next chapter!
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Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: Bev On: December 17, 2007 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Justine you had no reason to get personal! >:( Any way this was funny! I really want to know more about this thing. Hey and you need to remember to bring up your goggles this year...big meddow and i miss you!!
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Title: HI!
Reviewed By: Justine On: December 17, 2007 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still don't know what a 'gundam' is but this was really good! I'm glad you linked me to it! I'll be wating and reading the rest of these! P.s. This dom guy sounds like bev during one of her 'moments'!! :-)
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Reviewed By: Zero 101 On: December 12, 2007 15:44 CST
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Yay, you updated! So her name is Ookami, looks like we have yet another female gundam joining the 'lady gundam' family here on mediaminer. She's very cute character, tough but soft and somewhat kind. She reminds me alot of my 'lady gundam' character, Chaos Cammerce. ^-^ I thought it was really humerous how dense you made GunEagle, I could totally imgaine him being that abscent-minded. Very good and I can't wait until you update! ;D
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Title: YAY! YOU'RE HERE!!!
Reviewed By: Sayla U. Gathermoon On: December 04, 2007 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome to MediaMiner, Ookami! Nicely done!
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Reviewed By: Zero 101(hey!) :D On: December 03, 2007 18:04 CST
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This is really good! The interaction between Madnug and Dom at the beginning was funny, oh and when Madnug dove for the gundamess and yelled 'Mine!'. Oh boy, I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and may I make a correction? It's 'Zako' not 'Zakus'. Nice chapter! XD
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 13:41 CST
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Interesting. I would like to see more
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 00:44 CST
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*claps hands together and bonces up and down repeatively*continue continue continue!!..I DEMAND THAT YOU CONTINUE!!!
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