| "Merry Christmas, Mister Taishou - ON HOLD" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 02:59 CST
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thank you for writing more to this story
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaay..finally home and able to review. These two chapters were really great. Just enough lemons and action to make everyone happy (including me n_n). I really liked the cat fight, though I'm not much into this kind of action. U did a very good job, especially with the ending. Trusting this doesn't end here, I'll be waiting for more delicious chapters. Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I highly recommend this Christmas short (?) story to those interested in a kick-ass Kagome and a goal oriented, powerful, arrogant, etc. Sesshoumaru. The entire cast of characters are fully fleshed, so to speak, and virtually all have become part of a blended family. The interactions between these beings are emotionally charged with plenty of tantalizing lemons of a quality that few can write--and ElegantPaws is one of them. Of course the author ended the story with a tease and a phrase that we know will be the title of a new fanfiction she is writing that is not yet ready for posting. Despite this deliberate poke at her reading audience, you will love the story. [Please note the praise is sincere, the harassment is for fun.] Jean.
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so the youkai here are actually from the past and traveled to the future through the well. So Naraku is not dead and there hasn't been a final battle yet, right. Very interesting. "Brass ovaries . . ."--great line. Also loved Inuyasha accusing Sesshoumaru of getting horny watching Kagome intimidate and torture Kouga.
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You certainly set up quite the comedic scene: Sesshoumaru and Kagome going at it in the bathtub in an upstairs room, with Kouga literally baying at them from below outside, drunk off his butt. All this in a supposedly soundproof room, but everyone in residence can hear what is going on anyway. What a hoot! Then to top it all off, Jak is becoming very pleased at the same time in the sauna. I love it. Well, I am off to read the next chapter. Jean
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 04:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good couple of chapters and wow look at how angry Kagome got and I don't blame her one bit. There certainly is quite alot to this story and I am enjoying every minute of it. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 00:53 CST
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uhmm, what? I just got confused here. talking about the well and going back through time? but this is a AU story, right?
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 12:15 CST
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That was almost as yummy as Christmas dinner last night, haha. I can't think of much to say besides that I want to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kouga is truly exquisite when drunk "Kouga, Kouga, darling, I knew you were desperate, but this…" Ahhh this chapter was very, very enjoyable *wink*. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyaaa...now that is a delicious way to play pool. I trust more chapters are coming soon :D. Great job and Merry Christmas! Thankies 4 the present ^_^
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The build-up of tension and anger prior to and during the dinner was classic! It was a cat fight waiting to happen. It's too bad you didn't let them have a go at each other. Women usually fight dirty don't we, pulling hair, etc. I guess Kagome is too dignified to lower herself to that level, yet. Sesshoumaru appears to be totally smitten. You have many great lines: "Later, woman, you are a colossal tease," (Sess) "...You are an exquisite ningen bitch...." (Sess) "With a little practice, you might get good at this, Mister Taishou...." (Kagome) to name a few. Thanks for the loaded chapter. Merry Christmas! Jean.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A most enjoyable chapter I assure you. I love this story and will be sorry to see it end as every good thing must. Please update soon as I want to find out what will happen to Kouga once it is discovered what he had a hand in. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: December 23, 2007 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're a damn good writer. I kept overlooking this fic thinking it was one of these fluffy pieces, boy was I mistaken!! This is entertaining,provocative, funny as hell!! Can't wait for the next installment.. Keep writing,,
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww..what happened to the delicious way of playing pool? maybe in part B :D. Anyway, lovely ch and waiting 4 more
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 12:23 CST
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oh! oh!! this one was good!! genious little details by the way, *thumbs up* Gretchen... is that deutsch? (=as in german) ^-----------^
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