| "Merry Christmas, Mister Taishou" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww man, I can't wait to read the next part! Great job!!
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. I love how you portray Jak in this story. I am assuming they erased her memory of what she saw in the woodsman's cottage? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woots!! i love it!! ... i'm actually kinda stuck with the 'kiddie gloves'-thingy, what is it? and then the mokoma-sama. but i love your story!! very good!!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 20:47 CST
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Not wild about the pairing, but absolutely love the story. It reminds me of an old black & white. I can just see Kagome doing that Rita Heyworth hair flip. The dialogue is great fun to read. I like the weisenheimer characterization of IY and Jak is a lovable little vamp, but my favorite of all? The pervy fluff!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetest angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good! *grin* I can't wait to see the face of Kagura and even kouga. Ah! I can't stand the bitch. "Where is Sesshomaru" "Oh, making out with Kagome in the car." *laughing like mad, rolling on the floor* I really can't wait. I laughed so much with the pervert 'it' (fur) is alive moments! and of course the final scene, the kiss! beautiful work!! Please please update really really soon, don't make us wait too long! If I must, I'm begging you! *lol* please UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 16:52 CST
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Aww..this are really heating up. Sorry for not reviewing earlier, been a little busy. I really like this Christmas Story, and it has a really good plot. Honestly didn't expect Kouga to be that wicked, but it's not a bad idea. Oh, and Jakotsu...girl, it was the touch of a genius. I loved Kagome's little psychological analysis of Sesshoumaru - it truly befits him. Ohh..boy...I really needed to read this. Well, then..waiting for another update! Keep up the good work. Fluffy yah!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: December 10, 2007 15:11 CST
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whoa I think I actually had a stomach flippy moment at the "shut up I'm kissing you" scene. good work!
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when everyone is arguing until basically Sesshoumaru pulls Alpha male on them and "wins" the argument. Although it is clear the demons have lived for centuries, what about Sango and Miroku? There were some hints about knowledge of a life of theirs in the past, or did I misunderstand? I gather Kagome is clueless about her Miko powers, which is why she does not understand the "visions" she keeps seeing--the demons as they truly appear. Sesshoumaru's coat is a hoot, just taking care of Kagome's needs. Ha! Houjo will sweat and stutter his way through any interrogation and then fall apart. What was Kouga thinking? Well, obviously he was not thinking. I guess the great loss of Sesshoumaru's is Rin. I loved the bickering with the kiss at the end of the chapter. That was perfect.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reader rubs hands with glee! This is such a good story. I love the idea of the perverted fur hehehe. So far that seems to be one of my favorite parts. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: December 09, 2007 22:14 CST
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I love the part where Sesshoumaru invites Kagome to turn on the "sound system". That paragraph made me smile. Good job on this story. You have a wonderful way of wording things that really gets the emotions of the characters across. Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kouga is a complete baddie and he had the orphanage burned down. Major character flaw. Who is in the hospital? A cliff hanger, evil woman?! Jean aka Maddie50
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your portrayal of a feisty, kick-in-the-butt, take on the world Kagome. "This Sesshoumaru" as the untouchable, powerful, wealthy man who needs to be won over to obtain funding for a worthy cause makes a nice background for UST, humor, and a battle of wits. I got quite a chuckle when Kagome fell face first into the snow after climbing over the fence. Of course she ripped her knickers and broke her high heel. I really want to know what Sesshoumaru did with Kagome's delicates, or am I just perverted? Now I'll go read the next chapter. Jean aka Maddie50
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Title: Merry Christmas, Mister Taishou
Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am REALLY liking this story so far. Please, oh please, continue and finish it :D p.s. i like long stories ;]
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: December 05, 2007 01:35 CST
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I like it so far!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyaa..so sweet, and funny. This was brilliant, thankies for the 'Christmas present' :P
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