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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 20:50 CDT
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Wow, that was something else...lots of action. Gotta love it. I sure hope Kagome is okay. It looks like they are going to have a real battle ahead of them. I liked the whole interlude with Mushin. There is quite a bit of suspense and mystery. You always leave me wondering what is going to happen next. I'll be very disappointed if you try killing off Inu, or any of the gang. >_< You've always got me on pins and needles though. You've left me chewing my nails. So much creepy stuff going on. You must like creepy movies. Heheh. ^_^ I hope we get to see the next chapter soon! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying the story so far. You have very calm feeling to your writing. I also liked all old Japanese myths and tales you've added, it really gives atmosphere to the story.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha are together now... what's up with these spider youkai... hope kagome is alright... kinda ironic she's helping the one responsible for the dead dog incident... really they all figure everything out soon... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 17:04 CDT
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lovely and touching love scene. one wonders why the spider clan would want to draw yasha's attention to themselves just yet, one wonders if they had a bit of a miscalculation in their strategy or they don't understand the relationship yash and kagome have with the village. it seems that kagome hasn't lost any power from 'tainting herself with a youkai' *smirk* and she's helping the stupid jerk responsible for the whole dog murder thing. hope he remembers there are worse things out there than his stupid pettiness. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...your so evil to end the chappie on a fainting note. Beautifully done. Love seeing Inu's softer side. Makes me feel all warm and snuggly inside. *grinning*
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: InuAniManiac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was finally able to come back and get caught up with this one and how glad I am that I did. This is a beautiful story. You did an excellent job with the wedding night! Bravo. I'm excited to find out what happens next. In the meantime, I'm off to start The Evil in Men's Hearts. He He
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that at least inuyasha & kagome got married before the bad stuff... they have a stronger bond now as mates... hope they overcome whatever trials that come their way... what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aww..loved the end of this chapter! Inuyasha has finally found his 'home'! Nasty business with that dog. Sad that they didn't get even one day of fantasy before the real world of judgmental, horrible people crashed down on them. Love the story and the writing!
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 13:32 CDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20March0 8/romanceIYK3rd.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 21:03 CDT
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This ceremony was beautiful. I am not sure what was meant by the comments that Miroku and Kaede were making before the ceremony about her being up there alone. So the little kitten has an agenda? I am almost afraid to think about what shippo is all upset about... some villagers doing something nasty to get the closemindedness across? So very sad. But once again beautifully written.
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved the haiku; it made me shiver, and smile. I also loved the scene between Mushin and Hachi, it was just like them. This story makes me smile so much, and you are wonderful.
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Title: pewterwings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 20:25 CDT
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Is so beautiful! *sniff* I always cry at weddings. *cheeky grin*
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 18:12 CDT
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Great chapter! I hope Yoshiyuki will start to see something other than his revenge. Inuyasha and Kagome, what can I say...AWWWW! :)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 08:25 CDT
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maybe by the end of his journey he will realize that not all youkai are evil. sesshoumaru could have the strict policy not to interfere in the affairs of humans (like star trek's prime directive) and the guy has to reconcile that fact with himself. . . i remember seeing a few very fine drawings of yash/kagome in traditional wedding attire (attempting to find them) on deviantart and elsewhere, they look great together! ~ delighted, ginny
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 21:29 CDT
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I just love this story, hope you update soon!!
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