| "When the Rain Falls" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: bbbeee On: January 15, 2008 16:09 EST
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hey, its me again. at the last third of the chapter I got really confused by the changing of POVs. at first I thought yash had an affair with the mom, too. cant believe it. darn....hope you can clearify that.
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Reviewed By: bbbeee On: January 08, 2008 08:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
darn! no next chapter for the next weeks?! *pout* well, I liked your introduction that there are more S/K than I/K -and it's true- and the fast death of S. The story is great and you let some question open which I hope will be answered in the future.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 05:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... too bad kagome was too distracted at the funeral to really make any observations... kagura was the one who slipped that note in sesshoumaru's casket... what did it say... was kagome really sesshoumaru's fiancee... like the mystery... so many questions but no answers... wonder what happens next... until you update...
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Reviewed By: Sarayasha On: January 08, 2008 00:50 EST
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Two chapters in one day...YAY! ^_^ Can't wait to read more...and since you got two chaps out, I guess I can stand wait a few weeks for more >< LOL
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin(offline) On: January 07, 2008 19:55 EST
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I wonder what Kagura wrote. This is pretty good so far. Thanks for two chapters so soon :) Good luck as you continue!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 06:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... feel bad for inuyasha... kagome making him feel so unwanted... a typical sesshoumaru trait... so it was ayame he went to... will souta find inuyasha... what will kagome do when she meets inuyasha again... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Title: Beautiful....
Reviewed By: Tusuke Kounami On: December 26, 2007 18:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope that you continue on with this fic... it really has a wonderful and very interesting beginning... Poor Sesshy dying in the first chapter is a strange twist... but a good one. I look forward to you updating soon.
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Reviewed By: future author On: December 15, 2007 18:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good to know you love Inu/Kag stories just like me. I'm glad you decided to write one, especially a good one. A lot of the Inu/kag stories out are predictable and occassionally stupid and don't do the pairing any justice. There are a lot more S/k stories out for some reason and I'm always glad when someone comes up with a new inu/kag to read. I can tell just by reading the first two chapters of this story that I'm going to love this story. Its sad that Kag turned into a BITCH to inu after he helped her all because of her mother. Poor inu. Hopefully Kag makes it up to Inu. Until the next update, good luck.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! ^_^ Such an awesome chapter, and I can't wait to read the next.
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 13:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really good chapter. i like this story. it's sad in some way's but it's really good. i can't wait for you to update
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 11:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing beginning and I am SO glad to see an Inu/Kag story. Keep up the awesome plot!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... interesting turn of events... who was kagura to sesshoumaru... what secrets did he keep from kagome... who did inuyasha go to... what will kagome do now... can't wait for the inuyasha/kagome parts... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 18:18 EST
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Kagura hmmm? Seems there's more Sess's background than we know! Perhaps this is the reason it was so easy for him to restrain himself around K? But why go through with the marriage, if Kagura and he.....but were they, or was it one sided, or was he in denial about his true feelings, or.... And IY! Who answered the door, and why did she seem so familiar with him? Tangles, tangles. 'Twill be fun, methinks, working this all out!
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 16:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i love this story! It is amazing, the whole thing being sad in the beginning with Sesshoumaru's death... and then the happy with Kagome and Inuyasha. It was amazing. Truly a original fic. I LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 20:46 EST
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Until the name mentioned I thought it might have been Inuyasha that was the fiancee. The name and the death told me it wasn't though. Interesting story. I hope it continues.
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