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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: May 20, 2008 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dang it. all that work and the two brothers go and ruin it. fighting like that would of course ruin the new ideas of the people there. and now kagome if off with some unknown men that will do god knows what with her... can't wait till sess stomps on them. Great work. Please write more soon... ^_~
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Title: if you dont update soon...
Reviewed By: Dimplez On: April 22, 2008 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you do not update soon im gonna throw a humongous fit, i asolutely love ur story and u takin forever to update is grating on my being. UPDATE!!!!!! or perish at the end of my sharpened blade
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: April 18, 2008 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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am loving this story so far.. I sat down and read it in two days or so.. I love how you rounded out your characters throught the story and how you insert 'thought' qoutes in the middle of Kags lines. I am always laughing at the prediciments that Kags finds herself in. She always seems to get caught with her pants down... so-to-speak. Is there gonna be another massage in her near future....lol :grin: Again... good work and I hope that you keep it up. you do a good job keeping their encounters unique and changing. It is very realistic. It happened to me like that a lot. Getting caught in rough situations where you just wanna disapear. lol I am LOVIN IT! can I borrow your muse? :gives cookies as a bribe...: Chao, InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tba- i wish i could control kikyo. though killing her works just as well. ~kikyo- wat do u- ~tba-kicks kikyo and punches her in the face*DAMARE ONNA! ~kikyo-curls up into a ball on the ground* ~sessh-.... im not reviving her. `tba-some one always is. i mean really. u think she would get nicer. but she's even bitcher than b4. ~kikyo- i am- ~tba- kicks kikyo's side*shut up. `kikyo-whimper* ~sessh-isnt that a lil cold? ~tba-glare* im evil. wat do u expect. besides. in most of the stories i know. she ends up causin more trouble than all the episodes shes been in on inuyasha. ~kikyo- im not- ~tba-kicks her again* u shouldnt talk u know.its a private conversation. and i dont care about u. i mean really. ur FUCKIN DEAD1 STAY THAT WAY! `sessh-sigh* females and their mood swings. ~tba-glares* wat was that? ~sessh- uh.... nothing? ~tba- mmmm. lets get the whore back into the ground where she belongs. ~sessh- isnt inuyasha gonna object? ~tba-smirk* takes out keys from pocket and twirles them8 nope. not this time. ~sessh-*eyes widden* u didnt! ~tba-stops twirling keys* i did. now, help me get her off the floor. she's staining my carpet! ~sessh-mumbles* ~tba-wat? `sessh-uh... comming. update soon. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: April 17, 2008 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay. another great update. can't wait to see more. i would love to now what that cryptic kikio thought ment. dose sees or kag get beads...hehehe. keep up the good work...^_~
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! I'm back. My computer is no longer sick. I wonder if anyone else caught the significance of "grasshopper"? Use to be one of my favorite shows. I'm so glad Kagome apologized and made amends with Sesshoumaru. Inuyasha is going to have to quit acting like a big baby and accept their relationship. Also, I think Sesshoumaru is going to eventually find out that his future plans for his relationship with Kagome are not exactly going to work out to his way of thinking. I hope Takahiro fails again because not only is he after her, but now Kikyou is planning something. I don't think Naraku is dead. That was too easy. He's hiding, probably in the jewel, until he's back to full strength.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats weird. ~kagome- see. naraku IS UGLY ~tba- he always was. ~sessh- chuckle* but seriously. dont tell shippo wat happened. he would have nightmares for months. ~tba- yea*turns head to miroku* perverted nightmares. ~miroku- now, now, tba-san. u know i have a cursed hand ~tba- yeah, yeah. but if ur cursed hand gets anywhere near me... u wont have a wandering hand anymore * evil smirk* ~miroku- gulp* yes, tba-sama. ~sessh- ah, sama. a term for rich, or powerful. ~tba- smirk* tba-sama. i like that. ~inu-u know if u switch ur nick name around. it could be tab, or bat. ~tba-........ ~inu- uh... im srry... tba-....sama... ~tba-smirk* ok. well.... update soon. i cant belive kagome didnt notice sesshomaru's wounds. and on his legs? well... shes gonna have to either, stich them up, or bandage them. ~sessh- or she can leave me alone. ~tba- but by that time u'd parbably die from blood loss. ~sessh- just give me some raw meat and im ready to go. ~tba- sigh* why do i always go for the cute- agnorant- strong, jerks? ~sessh- cause ur weird. ~tba-hits sessh on arm* retorical question. well.... see ya. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 19:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderfully entertaining story. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 22:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
busted. ~sessh- told u we should have got a room ~kag-thts the first place they will look. ~sessh- and this is any better? `kags- u better not drop me. ~sessh- i dont think u would let go. ~tba-whispers- well. update soon while there two love birds fight. ~sessh- im not a bird. ~kag- its a joke. ~tba- uh.. yeah. watever. update soon yall! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 16:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So the group happens upon Kags and Sesshy - picturing that scene brought a huge smile to my face! Thank you! So how is everyone going to deal with it?... Please update soon! Keep up the good work!
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ice vixen x (nsi) On: February 26, 2008 16:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fricken sweeeeeet!!!!!! I was waiting for this for like ever and finally i got to see it... read it. anywho, I love the way the group each reacted to the sight. Very accurate to there character. Hehehe... Miroku most of all. Now i HAVE to read the actual after interactions and how sess will defend his actions or person. Keep up the great work and PLEASE don't leave us hangin for to long... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Galaxy_of_Andromeda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 13:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..... hee hee!! oh my gosh... that's freaking hilarious! ha! geeze, Kagome and Sesshoumaru never get a break do they? The whole thing is great! I just read it all. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 02:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't belive you stopped there!!!! Please write more soon!!! Draca
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: February 17, 2008 13:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grate as always. i cant wait to see the next ch. If inuyasha catchles them in an intimate situation then that would be awsome. Oh the Drama! yay. keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: February 17, 2008 13:29 EST
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I LOVE this story! I can't wait until Inuyasha finds out. I think the twit needs to know that she would not pine over him forever and what makes it sweeter is that it is with Sesshoumaru. Ah Sesshoumaru....I would have to agree with Kagome because if I were to come across the pinnacle of masculine perfection half naked and sweaty I don't believe that I would be able to make myself look away either. I really enjoy that Sesshoumaru is showing emotion and affection towards Kagome and in front of people to. The tension between the two has me sitting at the edge of my seat....oh how I hate suspense! Thanks for another great chapter and I look forward to your next update!
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