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| "Project 109 - GEN X" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] | Title: ha ha u rock!!!!!!
Reviewed By: thoughtless [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowwy! u write the most absolute great fics known in history of fan fic writing people. lol.i read both the prequal and the sequal in one night and my mother had to come in 4 times to tell me to go to bed, u know what i told her????? let me finish the chapter.....little did she know,that i was on chpter 7 of the prequal!!!!! keep em coming and update on slave soon cos im losing my mind, hope veggi made a lemony appearance!!!! thoughtless
| Reviewed By: wolf_girl87 On: February 06, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, I've loved your works of art. And yes I am forever and will be an ultimate fan of your creativity. ^^ Also.. one of your creations inspired me to write my own fanfiction on fanftiction.net it's called Broken Hearts and Prison. It features the main characters Bulma, Vegeta, Goku, ChiChi, Yamcha, 18, 17, Krillen.. And a few other characters from the series. And I added about 5 of my own characters. So far, in my opion it is coming alone just fine. I reccomend you attempt to read it. Well. I'm off to go to my friends house now. Heh, btw- have you considered looking over your work. You have a few grammer problems. And in a few sentences you forgot a few words here and there. Also, your punctuation is kind of off in all sorts of places. If I'm pestering, it's just one of those really bad habbits. But overall, I enjoyed reading your work.. Sure it took me awhile to finish but I hung in there. ^^ So, you started these in 2002 right? It's now 2005. 2002 was the last time we spoke.. you should probably consider doing some new fics just for the hell of it. Understand? Also, you should attempt to keep in touch. But yeah, it tooke me forever to find this fic, but thats when I remembered I saved the link in one of your emails you sent me. Incase you don't remember me, my email was and still is wolf_girl87@hotmail.com oh look at me, im rambling. How sad. Oh well, if it gets the person by then, I assume it's all good. Right? Of course. ^^ Well, I should be going but. Bye. wolf_gi | Reviewed By: SaiyanGal On: July 17, 2003 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Action Packed! Romanticly Seductive! Drop Dead Hilarious! Bulma Vegeta Domains give it TWO THUMBS UP!" says SaiyanGal Monthly | Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 21:00 CST
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Wai wai!! I love the ending of that fic, it was great! Please keep writing, I'm running out of fics to read. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Jenna On: July 17, 2002 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPPLLLEEEEEEEAAASEEEE RRIIIIGGGHHHHHHTTTTT MMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE. THHHHHIIIIIIIISSSSS IIIIIISSSS TTTTHHHHHEEEEE BBBEEESSSSTTTTT FFFFFIIIIICCCCCC EEEEEVVVVVVEEEEEERRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 13:29 CDT
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Ahhhhhh! Not another cliffhanger!? Why must you be so crul?! Why, why why?!! *crumples into a heap sobbing* | Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 21:23 CDT
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aww write more plz w/ sugar on top!!! | Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! New chappie! Score! *ahem* anyway, great chapter, heck, great story! I loved the first part, and the sequal is turning out to be just as good! One question though, Zardon, is he different from Zarbon? I'm a bit confused there, but I probably just need to re-read it (something I'm looking forward to) Alrighty, that's about all. Please hurry with the next chapter though! ~ Majin Cosmo | Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 09, 2002 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEE! nice updates. now i MUST know what happens. please update soon! you're good! | Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god this fic is getting good.I really like it.I cant wait and see what happens next. | Reviewed By: Throughtful On: July 02, 2002 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What a great idea, Bulma being a genetic experiment. It's nice to read some stories that dont all sound the same. Hey, I've got a great idea, why dont you make Bulma fall in love with Cooler. I'm serious, think of all the conflict that would cause =) That would really piss Vegeta off.
One thing that confuses me though, more about the prequal story, was how did Vegeta kill Frieza by himself? oh well, artistic liscense I guess. Its a great story anyway and i want to read more. | Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic please continue.this fic deserves more than just 3 reviews. | Reviewed By: cherry On: July 01, 2002 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it and can't wait to read some more!!!!!! Finish it soon!!!!!!!! please! | Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it write more soon !!! | Reviewed By: Mikan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, bloody amazing! I think this has got to be the best fanfic I have ever read. I absolutely LOVE the good characters and completely DESPISE the evil ones! And they ALL have such great personalities! Vegeta Goddess you’re such a talented writer! ^^ I bet if Akira Toriyama could read this he’d be amazed; I certainly am. It’s wonderful how you took consideration for the emotional attachment Bulma would poses for Paris, Jackilyn, Sunny, Paul, and Yakult since she was once ‘one of the children’ too. I really hope that they will play a larger part in the future of this fic. Wonderful, wonderful job! Absolutely amazing! *Claps till her hands hurt and then some* Please, please, continue this soon! I can hardly wait! 0_- this chapter really made my day! |
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