| "Dancing on the razors edge...." Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: MistressAlexa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet! I got to kick Bulma's ass! Or at least try. *he he* Anyway, loved every word of it. Great chapter. Excellent work. ^_^
Oh yeah, I got to grind against Vegeta, too. *drools* Oops! ^_^0 Ahem, well let me know when you'll start work on chapter six. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang yo, Bulma needs rehab BAD. She's just getting in deeper and deeper...Oh, the suspense!!
^_^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 20:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
CAn I make one teensy suggestion? Cut the word onna out of your vocabulary. It's way overrused, and not just in your story, trust me! EVERYBODY says it, at the end of everyone of Vegeta's sentences...
Otherwise, great job! |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: July 05, 2002 09:19 EDT
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how much do i love vegeta? well as much as everybody else does prolly, anyways loved it, keep going, cant wait until next chapter :D |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 21:44 EDT
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ohh this is a very dark fic, it's good though :) |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: July 01, 2002 20:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
oooh, you cant have Bulma die, save her save her, this is fantastic |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 07:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good gracious! Most fics just torture Vegeta, but this is awful! I mean, awful for Bulma, not your writing! I will most certainly looking forward to the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: chibionna On: July 01, 2002 04:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like ur fic cause ive never seen this done before. It's a great new spin on how Vegeta and Bulma got together instead of the whole vegeta seduces Bulma bit or visa versa, which i think is over done, but people keep finding new ways to tell the story. Anyway, ur fic is real good and i can't wait fo an update. |
Reviewed By: none On: July 01, 2002 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read it on ff.net before the site went down..... I LIKE! |
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