| "HOW TO LOSE SESSHOUMARU IN TEN DAYS" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: DUDE
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really really good..xD..I AM AN ADDICTED TO IT..xD..YAY FOR IT..Idk know why I said that, It is just that this story like tottally ROCKS MY SOCKS..xD..PWEASE UPDATE SOON..^^..Pwease have a nice day..^^ Your Fan, Sesshomaru_Kagome_Lover_4ever
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
your grammas drives me CRAZY!! sorry, but you really aren't a very good writer yet. YET. but if you keep this up you will be!! *a biiiig grin* your ideas are simply genious. keep posting!! oh, and the sugarhigh sesshy was sooo priceless!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TBA- i think they need to see a concultent. to work out their problems. i mean they can trick inu & kik. that way they both win.. ~kag- ooh! we can meet them in two diffrent places! ~sessh- and trick them. ~tba- giggle- ~both- wats so funny? ~tba-laugh- still reading here. ~both- oooh. ~sessh- well. ill have to tell her eventually right? im all about honor. ~inu- laughs evilly- im going to win! ~tba- hey! ur taking away my job! im suppossed to make sesshomaru's life misrable.! me! ~sessh- steps back- maybe if we walk away.. they will leave us alone... ~kag- goodidea. ~both- silently creep away- ~tba- u cant take away my job and... where did sessh &kags go? ~inu-i dont know. ~tba- shrugs- oh well. i guess we will settle this score... by... ~inu- throws up hands- ROCK ,PAPER SISSORS! ~tba- uh.. ok... ~both- rock, paper, sissors, ~inu- ha! rock! ~tba- ha yourself! papper! ~inu-hold up tetsuga- tetsuga! ~tba-holds up arrows- arrows. ~inu- fine. u win... ~tba- ok. lets find them now. update soon bye! ~TBA~
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Title: I DON'T LIKE IT!!!!...
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!..=]..xD..PWEASE UPDATE SOON..THEY ARE REALLY GOOD SO UH YEAH..PWEASE I AM BEGGING ON MY KNEES..WAIT..::GETS ON KNEES::NOW I AM ON MY KNEES..PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE UPDATE SOON..^^..I WILL LOVE YOU..xD..JK..OR AM I???..::CREEPY MUSIC PLAYS IN BACKGROUND::..BUWHAHAHAHAHAHA..xD..I AM NOT INTO YURI SO DON'T EVEN THINK IT..xD..HAVE A NICE DAY.. Your Newest Fan: Sesshomaru_Kagome_Lover_4ever P.S:I mean it..You really need to update..xD..ELMO KNOWS WHERE YOU LIVE..xD..I am Random..Update soon..^^ Buh Bye..xD
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~sessh- yes! i got away! ~inu- thank god it wasnt me. ~tba- hm... not a bad idea.-smirk- ~jakotsu- inu-babby! sesshy-kins! im baaaaaaaaaccckkkkk!!!!!!!! ~both-cringe- ~tba-run. ~both-run- ~tba-such idiots. ~jakotsu-takes off mask- its kagome!- ~tba-high fives kagome- that will teach them! ~kagome- oh yea! ~sango- well. i think u should actulaay have kagome sorta play anothr prank on sessh. like for instance... kagome could..like we did here- ~kags-waves- ~tba-she tricked sessh into this. but i bet it wouldnt ork. smell's diffrent. ~sango- but he could get her drunk. ~kags-shiver- i dont like the sound of that. ~tba- u could go dancing with him. ~kags- uh.. were trying to 'lose' sesshomaru. not 'kiss sesshomaru' ~tba-uh.. accidently push him off a cliff? ~sango- did u have sugar to day? ~tba-covers mouth- no... ~kags- let me say this 'again' were trying to 'lose' sesshomaru. not 'kill kagome' ~tba- true... ~sessh- come in running- is jakotsu here? ~inu- bumps into sessh- plz no-inhale- its to-exhale- hard to-in/ex-breathe. ~tba- im outta ideas. ~inu- not like u ever had any. ~tba- ignoring that. update soon! bye! ~TBA~
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Title: AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!
Reviewed By: TamTam On: January 21, 2008 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so mean but so funny what she's doing to him I think you should finush the story pronto.
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Reviewed By: whitetigter_kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 11:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update soon, i really really want to know what happen to sess and kagome in the next chapter. *_*
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Reviewed By: jessicacayton On: January 14, 2008 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg update!!!!! this story is super-addictive :P
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats nice u included us in ur a/n. oh which reminds me, why is kagura stupider here than in regular inuyasha? inu is very very EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but then again. every one is on the inside. *innocent look* *smile* see how 'nice' i am? ~f.g- if ur nice, then im the empress of china. ~tba- ur asian. but not chinese u dolt. ~f.g- my point exactly! ~tba- bangs forehead on table- im going 2 commit suicide... suicide!!!!! ~ f.g- uh... good luck with that.. ~ tba- which reminds me. she's my friend. we share an account though i shouldnt. ~f.g- if u had a brain u would know that tba! ~ tba- ignoring that last comment! ~ both- update sooon!!!!!!!!! ~TBA~ ~F.G~
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Title: Hello, Mortal.
Reviewed By: the_overlord_of_death On: January 10, 2008 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOO Cute! Usually, I'm totally against the whole Sessh/Kag thing, but this makes me change my mind 100%! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 18:33 CST
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I'm glad that your updating fast. Thanks for answering my questions even though most of them weren't all that important (like the hair thing, it was just some crap I thought of) Even if the story isn't realistic it's stiff funny as hell. ...I wonder where that saying came from... hell isn't funny... anyway I was thinking that the hair thing could be a result of his demon hair(I don't know if his hair actually would have demonic qualities, but doesn't it look like it would? It's so pretty!)... he like has light blue highlights normally, which gives him the ice price look... so maybe the stuff somehow changed that to the other color... I really do think of unimportant things WAY too much, I have no idea why I am going on about this... That last scene was really cute and I wonder what Inuyasha is planning... hmmm ~ I liked the line about Inuyasha with a paint ball gun... well I don't have a lot of time, so I hope you put up an new chapter soon I will definitely be happy to have some entertainment when it shows up!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be the best opening ever... and I had to write this little bit right away to let you know that, so know that you earned a review from me with the first paragraph! I hope the rest is that perfect! ~ OMG I love Bullshit! it's the best card game ever next to Screw Your Neighbor! ~ I think that is the first time I have ever laughed at an Authors Note... No shit you don't own Bill Gates... shit... ~ Ok, now Kikyo reminds me of my best friend Maggie, she always is saying that she doesn't roll that way when referring to her orientation. I usually hate Kikyo, but here I like her! ~ Ok, that was all that I just HAD to say right away for the first chapter.. I think I'll save the rest for the end of the latest chapter... Owww! my sides hurt from laughing! (after the first date) ~ Ok, I had to go watch the Milkshake video on You Tube cause I hadn't seen it yet cause I live under a rock or something and OMG... I am so red in the face thinking about Sesshoumaru doing that. I'm so embarrassed for him. i have almost too much empathy... almost! ~ WHAAAAAHHH!!! I hope you write fast because I want more :( NOW! I can't really tell how fast you are writing it, but it seems to be going quickly. I hope my way of reviewing this time didn't get too annoying, but I though you might enjoy seeing my first reactions to some things... I had a feeling when I read that first paragraph that it would be good. I probably won't do another review like that again, but I promise you another when you update! Oh, and wouldn't that pheromone stuff start to work on her too? I mean, humans do react to pheromones... I know scent can be a huge turn on and she seems like she might get in a position to get a whiff... and how the hell does a shampoo turn hair pink with blue highlights? I know it's possible to have lighter highlights with a single color bacuse natural ones show through, but in all my life as a cosmetologist's daughter I have never heard of such a thing... not that I care, you could just say that it is possible in your universe these two are torturing each other in and that would be just fine and dandy with me... just thought I would comment on it... and see if I can learn something new. Ok, that's it. I need sleep. No more writing stuff (especially reviews) when I should have been in bed hours ago. I get real chatty when I am sleepy, so I hope long reviews don't bug you. ok, I'll be waiting for that update!
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Title: Hello, Mortal.
Reviewed By: the_overlord_of_death On: January 09, 2008 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO funny! OMMG! When that Tampon fell on fluffy's face I almost fainted.And the kareoke was 2 die 4!Please keep on writing, it's so hilarious! I LOVE IT! And hi shary, or theblackangels!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh the irony. *giggle* haha! kaggy got a little of her own medicine. hopefully their clothes will dry b4 they wake up. though it would be funny. *evil chuckle* i like ur writting style. its nice yet evil at the same time. too bad kags fainted. update soon. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it. keep goin' with this story, it's FUUUUUNNY! Update soon!^_^
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