| "Life Twists And Turns." Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts dancing* im just too good lol anyways ooo me like this chapter!!!!! and here i thought Kagome was going to turn out as Kikyo... HAHA stupid me lol
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret (signed off On: March 12, 2008 15:33 CDT
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i'll try to be ur belta -rubs back of neck- if i cant do my job right u can hit me then fire me lol ^-^
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Reviewed By: SinginDiva On: March 08, 2008 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey really like your story!!! Please update soon. My suggestion for Mrs Higurashi's name would be Yayoi!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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ooooo sorry i havent read the other chapters >.< anyways i like Eniola ^^
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: March 05, 2008 19:01 CST
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I really like your story. I think that Mrs. Higorashi's name should be Alea. Its different and I am fond of someone who has it. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Angelgoddess1243 On: February 21, 2008 19:37 CST
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Opps what i meant to say was: Ohh, i like where this is going. I have been reading your other stories too and i really enjoy them. keep up the good work and update update update!
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Reviewed By: Angelgoddess1243 On: February 21, 2008 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, i like where like is going i have been readed your other ones too i really enjoy your stories so keep up the good work and update update update!:)
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 10:15 CST
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eeeekkk update soon please!
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Reviewed By: rissybabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 10:18 CST
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ahhhhh i loved it! keep up the good work ^-^
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! go kags! woot woot! luv this story! but y sessy and kags!? i want inu kags! anyways gr8 work! update soon! ^_^
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Title: Lil Babe0206
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 15:23 CST
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keep it up and plz update! i cryed wen inu and kags were fighting like dat at da prom im just a really big inuxkag fan. so plz have dem make-up (or make-out LOL!) and at least be friends and den dey could get togeder! ne ways awsome fic keep it up and update!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 20:52 CST
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it seems interesting ^^ me like it :P
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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this seems like a good story. keep it up. really like it.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 04:25 CST
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this could be really a good story. but you need to watch your malapropisms and homophones. spell check doesn't catch them as they're real words, just the wrong ones. example: meat- parts of dead animals used for food by carnivores. meet- when people or things get together. typos: dose- a measure or portion of medicine. you meant to use: does- to act or to do. . . dictionary[dot]com can help, a beta(someone who actually knows the difference)... another suggestion would be to put a few more spaces between paragraphs (line breaks), it would make it easier to read and prettier too! . . . i understand as i never used to be able to spell very well but it hasn't been completely difficult to improve. . . don't give up, your ideas are good, the scenes are executed well, things need to be looked over and tweaked a bit. ~ thank you, ginny
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