| "Life Twists And Turns." Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Title: Lil Babe0206
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 15:23 CST
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keep it up and plz update! i cryed wen inu and kags were fighting like dat at da prom im just a really big inuxkag fan. so plz have dem make-up (or make-out LOL!) and at least be friends and den dey could get togeder! ne ways awsome fic keep it up and update!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
it seems interesting ^^ me like it :P
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
this seems like a good story. keep it up. really like it.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 04:25 CST
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this could be really a good story. but you need to watch your malapropisms and homophones. spell check doesn't catch them as they're real words, just the wrong ones. example: meat- parts of dead animals used for food by carnivores. meet- when people or things get together. typos: dose- a measure or portion of medicine. you meant to use: does- to act or to do. . . dictionary[dot]com can help, a beta(someone who actually knows the difference)... another suggestion would be to put a few more spaces between paragraphs (line breaks), it would make it easier to read and prettier too! . . . i understand as i never used to be able to spell very well but it hasn't been completely difficult to improve. . . don't give up, your ideas are good, the scenes are executed well, things need to be looked over and tweaked a bit. ~ thank you, ginny
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