| "What she wants" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: inu_gurl91 On: April 04, 2011 12:56 EDT
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OMG!!!! y wouldnt u want to continue!? please wutever it takes, continue with this story, its amazing!! |
Title: Omg
Reviewed By: Aleaha On: December 27, 2009 17:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue writing the story!!!!!!!!it's amazing. Omg you have to keep this story going. I kinda got mad when it came to the cliffhanger
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Title: holy crap dude
Reviewed By: doggurrl On: July 20, 2009 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dang keep writing do not stop it is awesome my twin sis inutohru612 showed me best in the world and you rock
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Title: keep it up
Reviewed By: inutohru612 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2009 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god keep writing u r great never ever give up write on. woohoo
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Reviewed By: neko 7777 On: February 15, 2009 23:06 EST
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Ummmmmmmm hello! You said youd update at 10 reviews........... newsflash u have 37
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Reviewed By: Q On: September 03, 2008 14:31 EDT
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i love it!! please update soon!! and i really love the Celtic God part ^^
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Reviewed By: hungry girl On: May 07, 2008 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! wow! wow! i love it please please please do more PLEASE i am just dying to know what happens next! i really am dying for you to write more! i love how you made inu a celtic god demanding submissiveness! PLEASE keep going! is this the tenth review!?
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Lela On: March 19, 2008 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is a capturing story. The first chapter left me sad and hoping she would accept his apology. The second chapter left me with a need for more. This third chapter ... well lets just say my fiance is happy. It's a wonderful way of writing that you have. The full chapters, the articulate (well sometimes heh) characters and the decisive personalities. I am very impressed. Thank you for such an Appealing story!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 04:30 EDT
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I, um, hesitate to point this out, but 34 reviews means 10 + 10 + 10 + 4, soooooo, you already have 10 reviews. You have an excellent writing style and your story flows very well. D/s has never really attracted me, but a long, drawn out, sensual exploration is an extremely wonderful thing to enjoy with someone you care for and trust. You're doing a good job with this, pray continue.
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Reviewed By: GinBlossom On: February 23, 2008 13:41 EST
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I'm really intrigued by this story, but I don't really know why. Considering how poorly he's treated her, I really don't like this master and commander approach he's taking toward sex. He can, in my opinion, slow it down without it being about control and teasing HIS way. On the other hand, I also like how Kagome is willing to experiment a little while maintaining her self. Obviously, he's given her no reason to trust him completely with absolute control. Whichever way you decided to write this, I really want to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: washu456789 On: February 22, 2008 16:37 EST
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cmon update. lets get to the hot dirty sex part...
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 12:16 EST
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wow. kagome dang. inuyasha very sexy w/ da slowness. luv it! plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great! I hope you get 10 reviews quick cause i'm ready for more! keep up the good work *salutes* 00Dessy
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Reviewed By: Mori On: February 11, 2008 20:18 EST
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*looks at reveiw just before* now that's what i call enthusiastic... lol but i do agree on the more part. i look forward to the update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: KasumeTama On: February 11, 2008 20:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nani?? You left it THERE??? now that was cruel! *cries* More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More- More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More- More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More- More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More-More- More-More-More-More-More-More-!!! oh where are my manners? PLEASE-more?
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