| "What she wants" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: raggedy scarecrow On: January 24, 2008 12:46 EST
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Ahhhh! You stopped, and it was getting so good. Kuddos to the author.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 01:58 EST
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Hmmm *ponders how to express things* this has the potential to be a very good, kinky lemon. Or just as easily one that will make people cringe and walk away. You are walking on a knife's edge. Bondage, control, dominance games. They are difficult to write without making him look like a misogynistic asshole or her a spineless simpering bimbette. What most people don't know about the dom/sub relationship is that most subs are in fact in control of the situation. It is their will that allows things to continue. Also many of the best doms start out as subs, and vise versa. It will be interesting to see how this story plays out.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 01:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that inuyasha went to kagome and apologized... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 22:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That is absolutely amazing. I've read quite ALOT of stories, but this one has to be far on the top of the list. Please, please continue. The slow torture is killing me. Keep up the tremendously wonderful work. You are now on my favorite authors list so I don't miss a single word you every write! -- Amy
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Title: good
Reviewed By: hello chaps On: January 16, 2008 19:51 EST
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This is a great start. Please keep it up. It sounds like a beginning of a great story
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren On: January 11, 2008 16:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it already. Very original. Can't wait for your update...
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Reviewed By: angel789 On: January 10, 2008 09:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i was looking for a one-shot yesterday and this one gave me just what i wanted i hope u continue with the other parts of ur one shot because im on a cliff right now and i want to read the rest of ur amazing writing and one-shots (but im shere that if u wrote a story it would be just as amazing and i would read it) so hope u up date soon chrissy
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Title: SimmerNightsxx
Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 20:08 EST
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Wow I really think this could go somewhere. Keep up the good work! And UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: noah916 On: January 08, 2008 18:41 EST
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fantastic! cant wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... hope inuyasha & kagome get together... hope inuyasha apologizes to kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: January 06, 2008 16:27 EST
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Hot hot hot! OMG You must continue. I love the sexy confident Kagome you have. Just a question though, are you purposely making Kagome's hair "tawny"... I just can't imagine Kagome with non-black hair...kinda doesn't go well with her sweet Japanese face I guess.
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Reviewed By: fudge On: January 06, 2008 11:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
steamy!!! i enjoyed the story very much. It's so down to earth, very unique! keep up the good work hope you update soon!
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