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Reviewed By: Flamer On: December 27, 2002 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
im sorry but you really need to improve on the other details. especially bout the things all happening at once. try improving it a bit more becasue sesshomaru has no reason even to be mean to inu yasha to do that. so i suggest you have a better reason. |
Reviewed By: lola4eva On: December 07, 2002 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bum bum bum bum bum bum bum! Write some more1 Write some more! Oh please write some more! ra ta ta!
my song was stupid but i think you get the message.
P.S. i think that Kagome should go back to sessehomaru's body, nurse him back to health and to get back at having her heart broken, sleep with him again, then you add on. |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 04:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv your fic!!! And now I'm going to read the sequel!!!!! |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
that was so good it made me seriously cry...... |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only gripe I have is that chapter 3 "Light of Hope" is just a shorter version of chapter4 "betrayal." *shrugs* For all I know you've fixed that already and I'm just bugging you needlessly.
Sesshoumaru's a jerk. (But a hot jerk, dammit! I'd take him, but I'm taken! *lol* Here, my DBZ OC will take him. *YokazeJade smirks*) Hm, I wonder what he was going to give her? But he's no more. Oh well, the jerk got what he deserved!! I feel bad for Kagome, but at the same time I know that she can get through this. (God, I'm such a dork!!) And I'm awaiting more!! Wait ... is that a sequel!?!? *runs off to read the new addition*
PS Yes, I liked the story! ^_^ It's hard for me to write lately, too. I decided that I'm going to TRY and update with little chapters because otherwise it was like months inbetween my updates!! *Lol* Keep writing!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Marina Baksht On: November 27, 2002 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this was an awsome fanfiction |
Reviewed By: Anime Witch 02 On: November 01, 2002 11:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story, please write the next chapter soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaorinite87 On: September 29, 2002 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me you are not finished. |
Reviewed By: Kaorinite87 On: September 29, 2002 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is great! |
Reviewed By: hiyee On: September 11, 2002 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this so please continue no matter what |
Reviewed By: ? On: August 22, 2002 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
where is chpt 6? |
Reviewed By: Squeeker On: July 06, 2002 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seriously write more!!! ooh boy, inuyasha sounds pissed. hehehe, great story! i saw this fic on fanfiction.net but that site isnt working for me right now. it pisses me off sooo much! ahh, well please continue to update this one. |
Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arigatou!!!! You updated this version. Now I just have to wait for you to continue the story.
Jeez. Xing (fanfiction.net owner?) really needs to fix fanfiction.net. Well, anyway, thanks for updating!!!
Ja~
Anata |
Reviewed By: Anata On: July 05, 2002 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OI!!!! I originally read this fic on fanfiction.net
How come you haven't updated this version? If I recall correctly.....the fanfiction.net version
is up to chapter 5. Please continue. (On both sites. ^-^')
Onegai!!!!Arigatou.
Ja~
Anata
(Aa.....I know my nick is weird......don't let it bother you.) |
Reviewed By: A Fan On: July 05, 2002 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Fic!!! Please continue!!! |
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