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Reviewed By: Sheska On: January 28, 2008 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK...2
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Reviewed By: Sheska On: January 28, 2008 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK HERE IS ...1
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Title: ok...
Reviewed By: Sheska On: January 28, 2008 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well it was longer and I am pissed at u cuz u were teaseing me with it
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Title: WTF
Reviewed By: Sheska On: January 27, 2008 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
it was still short and u just said sheska nothing bout kayla so i will kill u haha
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it should be longer. but u shouldnt wrry anout ur health and her. its a sweet story. ~ inu- why am i not in it? ~ kagome- who are u ? ~ inu- kagome quit it. `kagome- no seriously ~ sessh- kagome meet count idiot. count idiot meet kagome ~ inu- hi kagome -holds hand out- ~ kagome- shakes inu's hand- nice 2 meet u mister idiot. ~ tba+SESSH+kagome- falls on ground laughing- ha ha too.. fun-hahahahahahha! ~ inu- ha! she did know! ~ tba- hell yeah. i just wanted to know how far sesshomaru was willing 2 go. and boy was it funny! ~ kagome- my-laugh- side-giggle- hurts!-giggles- ~ sessh- it is most amusing-chuckles- ~ tba- well i liked it. update soon. ~ inu- u better talk about me in the next chapter! -flexes claws- ~ tba- dont wrry i got him..-hits button on wall- ~kags- wats that gonna do? ~ sessh- wait 4 it... wait 4 it. -snaps fingers- ~ inu- cages appears around inu- damn u!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ tba- yeah. i get that alot. ~all_ BYE! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 10:14 CST
Comment/Review:
To Tell you the truth. I hate short chapters. I love to read a lot before the next chapter. I love Kagome/Sesshoumaru fanfictions. I think they would make a awesome couple. Oh well. I love your story and I'm going to add it to my favorites. Keeping updating. Cya!
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Title: Bitch
Reviewed By: Sheska On: January 26, 2008 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was still short and u said it was going to be longer I swear UGHHHHHHHHH JUST MAKE IT LONGER BITCH [u know i dont mean it lol but it needs to be longer]
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i knew naraku was it. -takes naraku vu`do doll- laughs evilly- ~ naraku- wat are u going 2 do with that human? ~ tba- smiles- takes needle out of pocket- and stabs doll with needle- ` naraku- falls down- wat the hell! ~ tba- uh.. acupuncture.(frogot how 2 spell it) its supposed to help people. though very painful. ~naraku- growls- ` tba- hm. i thought that was a inu thing. ~ sessh- u growl ~ tba- yeah but i roar to. ` boys- good point. ~ all- uh.. update soon. ~ naraku- wat r we going 2 do now? ~ tba- wanna come over to my house and kill kikyo? ~ sessh- hell! the computers still recording! ~ tba- uh..-painics- plz return 2 ur work. and if kik is out there.. i.. uh.. im not going to kill u? ~ boyz- 'smooth' ~ tba- wat eve. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow can sesshomaru sense things? ~ sessh- yes. like ur gonna hit me if i call u a dork. ~banmmmmm! ~ sessh- lying on ground- my point exactly. ` srry school work.it pisses me off. -helps sessh up-ohh1 a shoe sale! -drops sessh- ~sessh- ow... ~ story kagome- pervert! where did u take my clothes!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????? ~ sessh- oh god knows! ~ god- i dont know 4 ur infromation! ~ sessh- it was- oh never mind. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ update soon~~~~~~~~~~ bye! ~TBA~
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: Sheska On: January 23, 2008 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel so spcail but that was so stort i guess u been to busy with parish to write any more i want more
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-laughs like crazy- oh thats rich. wat is with sesshomaru and trees? i read a few fanfics. and it ended him up on the ground. being thrown through multiple trees. i think the highest number was 12. i wouldnt survive that. no doubt he could. but i mean really. i think he has a problem with trees. ~ sessh- i do not have a problem with trees! ~ tba- hand shoots out and knocks sessh into 9 trees.- uh, yeah u do. ~ inu- laughs- ha ha! u got ur butt kicked by a girl! ~ sessh- but if u think im weaker than a girl. and u lost to me. doesnt that make u weaker? ~ inu- huh? ~tba- yea. im lost too. ~ sessh- never mind... -groans- humans. ~ tba-.... wat eve. update soon! and im happy u said that about me! -blush- thats so sweet. ~ sessh- dont do that next time! i can smell her- ~ tba- pervert!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - beats sessh up with her purse-pervert,pervert,pervert,pervert,pervert,pervert !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh.-stops beating up sessh- update soon k? - returns to beating up sessh-pervert,pervert,pervert,pervert,pervert,pervert !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Why
Reviewed By: Sheska On: January 15, 2008 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's good but why does Sesshomaru have the presonilty as parish huh
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww. its cute. but i know kaggy would have done that, and probably would have had pepper spray too. *giggle* pepper spray...... anyways...i think u should update soon. like the story so far. though it was pretty short. unlike most stories i read. short and sweet is good. long and exciting is ok 2. update soo. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: tigerlilly1993 On: January 10, 2008 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unusual, interesting, and very enjoyable to read.
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Title: Thanx
Reviewed By: Sheska On: January 10, 2008 20:07 CST
Comment/Review:
thanx for spacing it love ya kain love,sheska
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