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Reviewed By: just me On: April 07, 2008 02:52 EDT
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i don't care what anyone else says, your story is spellbinding. i enjoy the glimpses into the past, and i think it helps to build the foundation of who the characters are, as well as understanding their points of view. keep up the good work. i love your story. don't ever let anyone tell you that you're not doing a good job. you're not writing for those people. there are plenty of fics out there that jump right into the hentai, and quite frankly, that makes the story a little less enjoyable. the buildup and anticipation is the best part of any romance...
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Reviewed By: SexyLips [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 01:56 EDT
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YA LISTIN TO THE LADY, if we knew what we were doing, then why are we reading??? Personally i didnt like the past present at first, but know its like OOOOOO ok so thats were that came from, its like the beggining of a story and the end intertwined and its cool and i love her and everyone else needs to shut up and if you dont like me saying it yall can kiss my furry cheeks, i love you ssm, you are da bomb i love all your storys, yes i am accious like all the others and miss the very quick updating, but hey we all have shit we gotta do, so keep up the good work and have fun, cant wait for the next update on all your storys.
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Reviewed By: Suriko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm absolutely entranced by this fanfic. I will admit I am one of the people who looks in the hentai and X rating section for the smut scenes, but there always a few that manage to get completely interested even without those scenes. I find both this Fic and What Your Eyes Do to Me exremely enjoyable to read. I also am personally not a fan of most inuyasha fics because I believe that they are too overdone. I can't wait until the next update, no matter how long it takes.
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Reviewed By: sjdae On: April 07, 2008 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello. omg i love the way u are writing the story i love how u mix the past with the prsent. i love the story. i completly understand why u r not updating very fast but to all the other people that complain they can just f**k off. u have a life and u need to live it to the fullest. well talk to u later ash
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Reviewed By: bwlj On: April 07, 2008 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I for one love the story, past chapters and everything in between. At first it was confusing, but now I love it, And please continue when you can! Life doesn't take a time off for things, as it should. So when you can update its cool with me, I enjoy reading and rereading the past chapters to pass my spare time. I love the story again!!
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Reviewed By: sovereigntystraticigalyplacedsonoonecanseemeintheclassroom On: April 06, 2008 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderfull... (trying not to squeal!)
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is maddening the way you have set up this story, however, it is delightfully maddening! It leaves the reader wanting more. Ignore the sods who are telling you to write more or update quicker. Ignore the idiots who dislike your previous chapters. Ignore the morons who want you to get on with it. You are doing just fine the way you are. This is a great story and the set up is perfect.
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 19:40 EDT
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I have to say that I just enjoy all of the stories that you write. They are just so detailed, the characters and plot. All I can say is that I just hope you never get the urge to just drop a story, they are just way to good!
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sessy as a vampire: HAWTTTTTT!!!!! Just the visual in that caption was awesome!!! And I think his slighty (although not THAT slight)stalker-ish behavior is cute, but then I think HE'S cute, lol. I LOVED this chapter. Is Shippo's chapter coming the chapter after the next? OOOOOOHHHHH!! I can't wait!! But I'll sit on my hands until you're able to update. No rush, we all have our regular lives to live!
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Reviewed By: I hav an account, juz too lazy to sign in On: April 06, 2008 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! I understand why you chose to do the past chapters, good call, I love them too!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 18:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can imagine that mmmm... vampire... ~sessh-u dressed up as a vampire 4 holloween 4 like 2 years didnt you? ~tba-well. atleast i didnt have to buy fangs. *smirk* ~sessh-hm... does that mean.. ~tba-well, update soon! bye! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 18:12 EDT
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wow, that's so cool. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That dance was beautiful. I can imagine how hot Sesshoumaru must have been dressed as a vampire! How bitter-sweet it was that they both felt that connection and wanted/needed each other so much but he couldn't tell her who he was. In fact, saying that made me thing of the song Bittersweet by Apocalyptica... the song really doesn't fit the story cause it is a duet where two guys love the same girl, but if it was one person singing it, then it would fit... sort of lol. That's hilarious/sad that Kikyo was a... virginity remover for all the guys at school at such an age. **shudder** I really hope Inuyasha stays clear of her. Icky. hmmm I wonder if Kagome will ever use the new room in the basement or if the relationship will still be growing and working itself out by the time it's done...I kind of want her to not need the use of that room so that Sesshy can not be in pain anymore, but then she wouldn't get to use the nice room her wonderful friends made for her and a deep and meaningful relationship (which I think you said was the only way to end the syndrome) would likely take longer than that to develop anyhow. Oh well... I guess it will be interesting to see which happens first, but I'm betting that she will get some time in her room... I feel bad for that last girl, but at least she's the last he uses like that...So next flashback chapter do we meet Shippo? I guess I'll have to wait, but still I hope so. I have been so curious about why he would need her and therefore become her friend like the others did. I'm really excited about the next chapter too. I look forward to finding out how they can connect with Sesshoumaru in that form. I also want to see how she reacts when she finds out who her mysterious vampire was. I love how you alternate past and future between the chapters. At first I was skeptical about how that would turn out but now I am convinced that it is one of if not the most brilliant ideas I have heard of. It really heightens the suspense and is a great way to maintain interest. If you had just done everything in chronological order it could have been kind of boring and seemed like a rather lengthy prologue. Also some of the surprises in the later part of the story might have been ruined. Sticking in flashbacks throughout the story would have made it seriously choppy and is one of my fan-fic pet-peeves. I am always amazed at what a brilliant author you are every time I read any of your work. I really should be a better reviewer and you know... review more often! lol
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Reviewed By: inuyasha0024 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is an amazing story. The was you write this story is amazing. You are an awesome author and keep up the awesome work. Can't wait too see what happends next between Kagome and Sesshomaru. ^^
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 16:37 EDT
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this is such a good story, i love the flashback chapters where we see how sesshomaru and kagome's relationship didnt progress and how it affected him. dont worry about what the reviewers write, you write well and the chapters are an ok size, also you update better than many other authors.
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