| "The Cave" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 11:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm very much enjoying this story. Heheh. There seems to be a bit of an internal struggle in both parties. I'm sure that the results will be well worth the wait! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: The Flaming Pheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 09:37 CST
Comment/Review:
This is so cool. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: sharkie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this start alot, it's well written and from your warning I can tell (hope) that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru aren't just going to jump into each other's pants. I liked the fact that Sesshomaru seemed dissapointed in his brother for so suddenly giving in, where in many fanfics it may seem like a 'triumph'. You're approach seems a lot better for the reason that Sesshomaru would be dissapointed that his normally stubborn brother, who stabs him with a sword every other day, isn't putting up a fight. Hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: The Flaming Pheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 10:42 CST
Comment/Review:
please update so cool.
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