| "Lost the Real Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 08:21 CST
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While I'm never a fan of any hints growing apart the about Yusuke & Keiko story itself is well written and clearly well-thought out. I'm hoping that vein of romance is not something that will bloom but I've a feeling aI will be disappointed. That is... if this tale is continued at all. *frowns lightly* I wish there was a better way to search for completed fics on MediaMiner, or if there is one that I could figure it out. Tired of finding really well written stories that are incomplete or worse -will likely never be complete. Or that there was some sort of alert system here... *laughs* ah well. I do hope you continue this sometime. Thanks for writing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: guest2 On: September 26, 2009 11:46 CDT
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Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 17, 2008 23:12 CST
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Thanks for clearing that up!^^ I liked the chapter. I hope Hiei warms up to her more. Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 17:23 CST
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ahh come on, you left off when it was getting good. udpate soon. i want to know when kagome is going to remember everything, all hell is going to break loose then.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 01:52 CDT
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Exciting chapter. I was enthralled with Kagome's discovery and interested by Kaede and Inuyasha's lack of reaction to Kag's declaration although I can also understand. Some things just need to be done after all. I'm interested to see what's going to happen to Kagome, because Naraku took all the steps needed to lure her to the tournament so surely he's not going to let her leave so easily. Slimey git! :P Anyway, I loved the chapter and can't wait for the next update. I plan on updating again too as soon as I finish that pesky paper for my Lit studies course. You're awesome as always and good luck.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: DarkHeartedSins On: October 08, 2008 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story absolutely aswome i can't wait till the next chap. is out x3
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: October 07, 2008 21:31 CDT
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I have one question. What's the pairing in this fanfic? I just want to make sure...^^
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 23:29 CDT
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poor kagome. her memories are starting to come through and she is so confused. plus she is scared for her brother and his team who are fighting. i am waiting for her powers to take over if something drastic happens. update again soon.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 06:05 CDT
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this is good so far, i cant wait until her memory returns
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: August 29, 2008 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic!!! Please update ASAP! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 00:58 CDT
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Glad to know that my reviews have been missed. Hope you didn't think I stopped liking your story or something like that. Once again you've managed to produce a wonderful chapter. I like how you're starting to show uncertainty in Kagome's character, her inability to be sure of how to get on but recognizing it's hard to move further if you can't remember what you had done previously. I also was surprised by the appearance of a falsely concerned Naraku inviting her to the tournament. That in itself spells trap to me, just imagine all the blood thirsty demons that can easily get riled up. How will they react to having the presence of a miko among them? At the same time though I wonder why he didn't take care of her himself. Does it have anything to do with the fact that while Kagome seems to have the Shikon with her there is no power in it? Or at least that is the impression I have of it as of right now. Does he want her around to try and find out what happened to it or does he have some greater scheme in mind? If you think about it, he's always had such a hard time killing Kagome and the Inu. tachi. Maybe he just plans on taking her to an area where her death is more assured, by thousands/millions of uncontrollable demons that want to see blood shed and probably help create it. I also look forward to how Inuyaska (Inuyasha?) and the others will make (maybe?) a greater push into the story. Now the only thing I'm left wondering is, are they all the original people she traveled with? Reincarnations? Coincidences? I wonder if she'll even make a side-comment to Inuyaska and Kaede, as responsible as she is I can't see her suddenly leaving her job without any explanation and that would probably requrie an explation as to why.... You got a lot of probabilities ahead of you. Good luck and I look forward to the next chapter. I have to get kicking on my own stories too sometime soon. I'm leaving in January for another three weeks and supposed to go to Iraq sometime in March I think are our orders. I hope to have my stories completely or at least mostly finished before then. XD
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 02:53 CDT
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i sense trouble coming with a capital T. i was waiting for naraku to make an appearance. i swear that guy shows up just like a bad penny. poor kagome is being pulled into everything again and she doesn't have a clue about what is going on. update soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh naraku is so slimy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 00:34 CDT
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Wow! You updated a couple of times while I was gone. I was rather happy to have three chapters to read, it made up for three weeks of hell with no computers or internet access. I like how it's progressing, especially the Kag/Yus and Kur/Kei relationships and Kags realizing there is a little more to her brother. This is really good and I can't wait for the next update. Luck!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 05:03 CDT
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kagome the fearless. not many would just hop on a motorcycle with someone that doesn't have a licsense yet. although i really can't talk. i have done it, and it is one hell of a rush. i think it's cute that kagome confronted kurama about kieko, especially since he warned her about yusuke. typical sibling relationship. always teasing each other about a possible boyfriend or girlfriend. update soon.
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