| "Lost the Real Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 02:11 CDT
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i have a feeling yusuke is taking an interest in kagome. that can be good in a way because yusuke is so protective of the one he loves. the only problem i could see is yusuke and kurama clashing because kurama is protective of his big sister. poor kagome, first her memory, now souta. update again soon. i want to read some more
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I will thank you for updating I just wonder who else will pop up in the story alive and human?
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Reviewed By: fhfh^ On: July 28, 2008 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! I think that Kagome should get her memory back fast and not tell anyone that she got it back. Secretly, she can watch over her brothers and have contact with her old friends without anyone knowing for a little while. It's just a suggestion. Please update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 08:27 CDT
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I like your story, but I have noticed some gramatical errors, in one or two of the first few chapters, it says that Kurama is the older half sibling. Inuyasha is spelled Inuyaska... and I think that is that... lol. Well I hope that you update soon I can't wait to see what is going to happen. Ja Ne! I.S.
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: July 28, 2008 04:26 CDT
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Ah its nice to hear that I'm to first to comment on the inu-tachi making an appearance. So, what can I say about this chapter. Well first off I can say I enjoyed Hiei's teasing remark to Kurama at the end of the chapter. That and these dreams of hers are getting more and more interesting, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 01:56 CDT
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update soon. i am curious to see who kurama approves of for kagome. looking forward to another chapter.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my I love this story so far please update when you can thank you.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 11:11 CDT
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Thank you for a wonderful update. I'm really getting into this story. I find it particularly neat how Kagome knows without really knowing... does that make sense? Anyway it's really building and I look forward to the next chapter. Good luck
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 10:45 CDT
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Yay Kagome is getting her memories back, I Can't wait to see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: July 20, 2008 06:51 CDT
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How interesting this chapter turned out to be. I had been wondering whether Inuyasha and Kaede's appearances were coincidental as reincarnations or something else. I'm glad this chapter cleared that up for me. Great work and its good to hear that you will be updating more regularly from now.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 02:28 CDT
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i would like to read some more please. update soon. i want to know what caused kagome's memory loss. i also would like to know if kurama and her get together since they are only step siblings and no blood relation if i understood correctly. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! LOL!! Look who I found on fanfiction.net!!! LOL... I love this stroy. Truly beautiful!
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Some of the pieces are coming into place. But I wish I knew what happened to her before she lost her memory. Your so evil. God, I can't wait for the next chapter. It's better than coffee. And I'll tell you nothing is better than coffee. That's how good this story is. But Why must you do this to me. NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!! Poor poor me. I can't get enough of this story. I love how you did the similarity to Inuyasha and the gang to yuyu gang! I is sweet like sugar. Then they find out how she knew demons and stuff like that before she lost her memory. The is the cream to my coffe. So you get a good story. I get a good coffee. Homemade or starbuckets' coffee. You can't get enough. Just like this story. I'm going to cry. So so so not going to cry but is at the same time. Like that. Wow, I typed alot.! 0.0
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Am I dreaming! You put up a new chapter! I'm so going to read it! *Acts like Jessica on coffee*
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: April 22, 2008 06:48 CDT
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Ara~ I hope you post more chapters soon, Im interested in this new turn of events
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