| "The Great 7 Kingdoms" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 16:41 CDT
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Now this will be interesting, Kari and Gatomon are awaking new feelings for TK and Patamon, Gatomon sure got hurt when she saw WhitePatamon pouncing Patamon, she felt really miserable. And Patamon asking her if Veemon did something, shows how much he trusts on him lol Glad you updated I really was missing this fic of yours ^^
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Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 12:10 CDT
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oooo Gatomon (Kari's) is getting jealous of this new kitty, things sure will get interesting soon, I'd say Lionmon/Patamon should notice Kari's Gatomon's reaction and smile to himself, then if she gets Lionmon to talk with her asking him for an explanation because he sure has a lot to explain actually, I mean such secret he kept from her that is the fact he is a guardian of the kingdom of light ^^ Nice that pure white Gatomon a really cute kitty ^^
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Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 18:27 CDT
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That means problems with capital "P" and they just started seeing as how Agumon got cut off when he was talking. And again nice humor touch with the guards bringing the guys in lol Gotta admit that it hasn't been a good day for the guys huh? XD Oh by the way I wanted to ask you for permission to use your digimon Lionmon for Patamon on a fic a friend of mine and I are working on, we liked that design of a digimon you came up with, of course we'll credit you for it like it should be ^^
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Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 17:07 CDT
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lol poor guys, with their digimon unable to digivolve due to being hungry they had to run but hey, that will keep them on good shape, exercise is good for the health XD Nice description of the kingdom of light very fitting ^^
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Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 17:08 CDT
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Nice chapter, liked how Lionmon protected Gatomon, he even roared, I bet he would have killed Wolfmon if he would have hurt her ^^ Things sure are getting pretty interesting here, wonder who's Wolfmon's master? and why the other kingdoms started to attack the kingdom of light and want Lucy? So much doubts that I hope get solved on the next chapters ^^
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Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 18:17 CDT
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Oh my bad on a part on my other review, though not far from being the same thing just changing it to that Kari seems to be starting to be a bit jealous of Lucy due to how TK was carrying her ^^
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Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 18:15 CDT
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Nice chapter, and I see Kari will have a bit of struggle on her feelings seeing how TK was carrying her ^^ And was funny how Lionmon told the guys to get their own ride lol, why I have the feeling he was kinda angry at Davis? you know with Davis dating Kari and all XD You should add some PataGato too, seeing as how Gatomon was impressed with Patamon's new form and voice, and knowing how curious she is I'm sure she will want to get a full explanation from Patamon, mostly why he hid something like that from her ^^
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Reviewed By: Lord Patamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! this sure is something I never saw before for TK and Patamon, I loved the new form Patamon got, is really cool, you should post it too on fanfiction.net I'm sure you will get pretty good feedback there too ^^
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