| "That Ghost...." Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Title: Heya
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok first things first! 1) Thanks for reading and reviewing my fic, Kagome Enchanted! You might like to read my other fic The Light to his darkness? You may enjoy it.. 2) Okay I read your story! Good idea! Original and the chapters are a bitesize length! Just enough to keep you interested. 3) (The bad bit now) Your spelling is off!! Use a spell checker, or get a Beta! I know it may not seem like much, spelling a word here and there wrong but after a while a reader will get bored of reading through mistakes, trying to work out what you mean! So use Word or get a beta! Advertise at the end of each chappie for a beta!! You'll be surprised! If you can't get a beta i could be your temporary beta! 4) You know at the end you have a little blurb? well try not to miss out letters. You write lil instead of little and it isn't very impressive for someone who can write as well as you can to shorten your words to like good or sound cool! That's all i've got to say! And this is NOT a flame but helpful advice (depending on wether you use it or not) Love Draca! xxxx
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hahahahahhhaaahahaha i like it ^^
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Reviewed By: yes21314214241414144 On: February 12, 2008 21:22 CST
Comment/Review:
make a new chapter
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 05:47 CST
Comment/Review:
bawwww.... i was waiting for the next chapter T-T AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
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Reviewed By: yuper On: February 05, 2008 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
make a new chapter please
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 20:37 CST
Comment/Review:
lol n'awww Inuyasha gets scare easly :p
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Title: good!
Reviewed By: MisfitBride138 On: January 24, 2008 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your fic! though it could use a bit in the spelling department but other than that i love it! keep going i'm adding you to my favorites so i can see when you update, but please do so frequently i really like this story!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oooo *giggles* Inuyasha is funny when he is scared XD
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for reading my stories. I'm kind of embarrassed though. Club refuge is really badly writen. *blush* I have no idea what I was thinking when I wrote that 1st chapter. It's the worst. >.< I haven't updated any of my fics in awhile... Nice update, by the way!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SpiritRose On: January 23, 2008 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds like a fun read! I like your style ^_^. How long is this story going to be?
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the originality of it plz continue, and make your chapters long. I really like the plot line
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 22:54 CST
Comment/Review:
oooo sounds interesting ^^
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a little short, but I understand it was just a prologue. It's interesting so far... You should definately update soon!! The only critisism I have for you is your style of writing... It's not the worst I've seen (or read) but I think you should try refrasing when there's a noise. Try writing it into a sentence. Like when you just wrote: BANG, BOOM!! Instead, try writing something like 'Kagome heard a loud bang, followed by another loud crash' (or something along those lines.) You get the idea, anyway. I know it's hard to change you style of writing, so I undestand if you don't take my advise, but I think it would help out a lot. It's easier and more enjoyable for readers to read it that way. It just flows and sounds better as well. ^_^ Update soon, okay?
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Reviewed By: yupper On: January 22, 2008 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
u gotta make another chappy!
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Reviewed By: Miku Hatsune On: January 22, 2008 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz makes another chap.
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