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Reviewed By: nishi_pen On: July 14, 2008 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Please update soon. I can't wait to see how this works out. Don't let the mean guards keep Duo out either
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 16:13 CDT
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I have been checking my email pretty much daily for an update to this story. After months of disappointment I was not expecting an update at all. But then I open my email and I saw it... I started jumping around I was so excitied. I stopped the music I was playing so I could completely devote my attention to reading. And I am sure happy I did! Another amazing chapter. Oh man Karl messing up. Nice job. I just love how you write and how you pic the other pilots taking Q's death and Wufei's situtation. You just have skills. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!!!!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 12:15 CDT
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Yaay, the awesomeness continues! And the mind fuck continues, too. I liked the foreshadowing for the last scene, from one of the previous chapters. Something about how Karl being smarter than Wufei was making him a bit uncomfortable, IIRC. Makes sense for a master mind to be planning *something*. I'm very glad you got a beta. There've been minor but many mistakes, and this fic deserves all the love and attention it can get. I think if it ever needs summarising to someone, it'll be, "And then it got worse."
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 15:33 CDT
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*gentle nudge* Continue, please?
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Reviewed By: DDee On: June 07, 2008 18:59 CDT
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No wonder I'm going frigging nuts checking every other day for an update of this story. It's been over a month since the last post! Come on, have some pity on your devoted readers, give us some more... pleaaaaase.
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Reviewed By: Hisui_08 On: May 04, 2008 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You totally blew my mind with those two chapters! Can´t wait to see what will happen next. Normally I don´t like OCs, but I absolutely adore Karl, although there´s something conflicting about him that makes him suspicious... Duo confirmed my speculations about Wufei and Quatre and it´s good to know what exactly happend when Quatre was found. Well, I can´t place Onur! Is he really the upright person he pretends to be? I´ve got a strange feeling about his character... ok or maybe I´m totally wrong here, we will see. Thrilling chapters, I´m curious to know what will happen next and I absolutely believe that Wufei is in immediate danger now. Thank you for the awsome chapters!
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Reviewed By: Hisui_08 On: April 22, 2008 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intense chapters! The scene between Karl and Wufei was realistic and believable under such circumstances (maybe Karls resemblance to Quatre also plays a little role in Wufeis decision of getting involved with him?). Their "relationship" will either lead them into more trouble or could be some kind of anchor in thir daily routine..... By the way, MS. Prescott´s opinion about Wufeis possible rehabilitation was really..... disturbing. I´m curious what will happen next, cause there´s somthing ominous in the air. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 15:32 CDT
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Still good. Still creepy. There's some kind of ominous feeling to this chapter.
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 00:08 CDT
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Wow that was so intense I couldn't even handle it. Amazing actually, you are a great writer. Very impressive. I liked it alot. Keep up the good work! I can't wait until the next one!
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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The cell scene was well done, down to earth and very realistic. It fit the setting and the pacing; prison sex just isn't all that romantic, and trying to make it that way would've just flopped. Throwing Duo's bandana away, I think that probably has symbolism to it, even if it doesn't to the characters. Also nice bit of research going into the self-regulation. I don't know whether or not it's accurate in real life, but it's *believable* here and that's what's important. Unfortunately, there are a lot of typos in this chapter. Most of them look sort of like having been written on a wireless keyboard with bad batteries - letters missing here and there. Spellchecker probably wont catch them all.
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 03:37 CDT
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This is a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next. I love the mystery and the growing sexual tension between Duo and Wufei. And Trowa and Heero are totaly doing it. And what how serious are Heero's problems? I feel like Wufei is going to get seriously injuired in the next year before he gets out. This is so exciting I can't handle it. Please update soon! Please
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Reviewed By: Hisui_08 On: March 21, 2008 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the wonderful chapter. I think it was rather hard for Wufei to ask Duo for help, especially when you know that he is/was actually a loner during the two wars. Although this new situation probably changed him a bit. I like the way their relation slowly seems to deepen, but I´m also sorry for the trouble it will cause. And I´m curious what Duo will find out and how this will affect Wufei and the others. Great chapter, please keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Kansho On: March 13, 2008 16:53 CDT
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I love the last few lines about redrawing boundaries. Seems like Wufei's going to rough things up a bit, or have the others rough things up a bit now that there is something developing between he and Duo. =D I'm enjoying every update. Please keep up the great job. =)
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Title: Good plot.
Reviewed By: c00kiemon On: March 10, 2008 03:43 CDT
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What I wrote up there pretty much sums up my comment. And Wufei is bit more tired and mellow than the usual arrogant dragon I'm used to reading about but that's a given, seeing as how he's practically in prison for an undetermined amount of time. But even though the plot has me riveted, it the character interaction that has me coming back to this story. The OCs and the angst aren't bad either. :D
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Reviewed By: Hisui_08 On: February 21, 2008 09:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the two fantastic chapters. The reunion on Wufeis birthday was kind of depressing when you think about how it ended. Wufei seemed so calm about the whole situation, the fight and that he was punished for it. He tolerates an accepts it all without scrutinizing, I think, being in this institution changed him. Well, the last chapter was really sad. They avoid to talk about Quatre, especially Wufei. I think Duo wants to talk about him (you mentioned the grief counselor) in an attempt to cope with it. I don´t know where to place that nightmare. Did Wufei and Quatre have some deeper relation? Or did he have that dream cause he dreaded the meeting with his friends and the unavoidable conversation? Or is it the great loss he is suffering from? I´m really curious about Wufeis relation to Quatre, cause it´s a little bit mysterious... It´s good that Trowa and Heero are there for each other, I hope it will work out for them, even though they have their own problems. Thank you for the chapters I´m looking forward for an update! I wonder what Wufei will ask Duo and how he will be able to help him.... Greetings Hisui
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