Reviewed By: michew_33 On: May 08, 2008 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a really good story! When most people write a long story, it ends up seeming too long and stretched out, but you performed this feat like an expert. Before I head read this, I had been valiantly attempting to find a story with some plot, originality, and characters that seemed "real". Notice how I used the word "attempting". My brain had been turning into mush but, thankfully, I stumbled upon your story. My poor, abused brain thanks you. Keep up the good work, I will look forward to reading more well-written work from you!
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