Title: no Reviewed By: Kenju On: March 25, 2008 13:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a pretty good story, I've always been suprised that the hasent been ANY TiYuRi stories on any sites, I think my favort line was when rikku said "I don't want beef...I want sasuage" I could see rikku saying that while chomping a beef strip so easly it ant funny. Keep up the good work and post more chapters ya hear!
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