| "Of Snowstorms and annoying old women." Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really, really, really love this! You're amazing, despite a few errors. The main one I noticed is that you said Rin's parents/family was killed by wolves; they were actually killed by bandits and Rin was living alone in a rundown hut near a village when she was attacked and killed by Kouga's wolves. Despite that, I love you! I was so disappointed when I realized there wasn't another chapter. I love the way you made Kagome's and especially Sesshoumaru's character; they fit exactly into the situation. You are GOD! Hurry up with the next chapter ;P Ja mata ne!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 15:30 CST
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This is good. I like it, despite the fact that I typically don't like SessxKag fanfics in which one of them loses his/her memory. I like how you still keep him in character, even though he has amnesia. Good job, and I hope you keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Zeos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. You have so much potential!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 00:12 CST
Comment/Review:
aww, this is cute. i want more plz! lol FL
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Reviewed By: nyuu_nyuu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work! love this story
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 01:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow I really like how this is taking shape. Great work!
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