| "Inu Valentine's" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reciprocal Review! This was a very interesting story. I especially liked your writing style, and how you built up the passion until neither one could stand it any longer. The limes and lemons were hawt, too. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 02:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm...interesting. Whichever you choose will be fine by me. But InuYasha being human is just weird, but whichever you'll enjoy writing more will be fine by me. Oh and I enjoyed your story!
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Reviewed By: inubaby26 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 23:18 CDT
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i like option 2 a lot, so if you could, can u pleeze start w/that one first.
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Title: Second Story
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 17:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the idea for the second one! As long as Inuyasha is a half demon! =) But the first one is good too, I just love half demon Inuyasha lol. =) Btw, I love this story! It's clever and hot, great job!
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Reviewed By: Inuluver66613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg! I loved it and i hope you do make it into a actual story! I will deff. read it if you do! I loved it!
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Title: Epilogue
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 03, 2008 04:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, this was very cute! Thank you for inviting me to have a read. It had a sweet ending, and I love how dominant InuYasha was. Great job on this. :)
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Title: Chap. 5
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 03, 2008 04:53 CST
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Very nice lemon. I could picture it -well executed. I also giggled, so that gave it a lighthearted feel. I was listening to My Chemical Romance's "Demolition Lovers" (a song that would never fit lyrically) and it gave the scene a certain feel that I enjoyed. :)
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Title: Chap. 4
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 03, 2008 04:34 CST
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Koga, as usual, pissed me off, but he made me laugh, too. I loved his parting shot -very funny. But he'll always eat InuYasha's dust. 0.~
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Title: Chap. 3
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 03, 2008 04:28 CST
Comment/Review:
InuYasha is just too much fun. I love that he's so aggressive. You write him the way I like to read him -such a rare find!
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Title: Chap. 2
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 03, 2008 04:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Very entertaining, and the titles are very clever. Quite enjoyable. You're portrayal of InuYasha is great!
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Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 03, 2008 04:16 CST
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This is a nice opener. I love how he's such a man's man. Yum. Great job with this. ^^ ~InuGrrrl
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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: March 02, 2008 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
eee i really liked this!!! I totally think you should make it into an actual story!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 05:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... really liked it... cute and sweet in the end... good work... great job... until next story...
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 12:27 CST
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very cute endind. I love it very much. Sad that it's over though.
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Reviewed By: mojop [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 21:13 CST
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Ohhhh...I love the way you designed Inuyasha's character! the relationship between the two of them is so feisty! I love it :)!
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