Reviewed By: cjandre On: February 25, 2008 09:42 EST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I love the way you are envisioning Gaara in this. It is a really different take on that character and brings out some very interesting possibilities. All your characterizations are strong - and i especially liked naruto in the last chapter. The fight here was extremely well written. This is a hugely enjoyable story and I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Reviewed By: KakaIru On: February 22, 2008 00:09 EST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I love this fic! Totally! I love it! I like Temari's part and the experiments. I think I'd like the hugging experiment too! ^^