| "Inuyasha Turns Into A Girl?!?" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: funny
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this made me laught alot. hahahahahahhahahhahahahhhahaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaahahhahhahahh hahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahhaahah this story was highly enjoyable. it make one wonder what would have happen if inuyasha was a girl. please add another chapter soon im a big fan.
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: KagomeHarigushi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was great let us know when you'll update. Though I when Naruku licked Inuyasha (the girl version) it sort of made me feel sick. By the way this is my first reveiw so I might make myself sound stupid:)
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
........ ~sessh-.... ~tba- omfg. wat is with guys!111!???? ~sessh- *shrug* we r males. we tend to think alot about things you girls wouldnt get. ~Kysha- whats that mean? ~tba- cough* kysha. ur oobi's untied. ~kyasha- uh.. be back in a jiff! *runs off* ~sessh-..? ~tba- well, she/he doesnt wear shoes. ~sessh-.. that explainsd sooo much. `tba- oh well. bye! *bops sessh on the head* i wonder, if i bop u on the head. will u be nice? ~sessh- i love animals! isnt life WONDERFUL???!!! ~tba- bops him again* i liked u better as a ego-centric jerk. *draggs sessh away by his hair* ~kysha-im back!!!... were did every body go? ... oh well! *skips down the path to candy land* skip,skip,skip,skip. ~TBA~ (i only did this for my reasons. and cause i want to make people laugh. dont own.. duh)
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SESSH-smirk* im smarter. ~tba- oh gee. i wonder wat naraku 's gonna think? ~kaysha (i think thats how its spelled)-uh..Tba theres blood- ~tba-runs far far away* NEVER!!!!!!!!! ~kaysha-? uh.. was it something i said? all i was going to say, was that theres blood on the ground. and she shouldnt step in it. ~sessh-smirk*wats the point? she never listens. ~kaysha- ur hot. ~sessh-...... and thats my cue to leave. 8disppears in his orb form* ~kaysha- NOOOO!!! im sooo alone! ~screen fades to black~UPDATE SOON!!!! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O ~sessh- im glad i aint in this train wreak ~inu-..... OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!!!!!!!! ~tba-uh.. *nervous smile* on the bright side... your closer to koga now. ~inu-WATS THAT SUPPOSSED TO MEAN??!! ~tba- i ment that because ur in his lap, u... oh never mind. ~sessh-smirk* ~inu- wipe that smirk off ur face sesshomaru! ~sessh- im sorry. but i dont think a GIRL like you have the right to tell me wat to do. ~inu-turns 10 shades of red. as much from embaresssment as anger*WHY U FUCKING SON OF A - ~tba- throws rock at inuyasha* u know. he's a lot quieter as a girl. ~sessh- girls talk alot. ~tba- but boys have bigger jaws. so u CANT say WE have big mouths. cause WE DONT. u GUYS do. ~sessh- watever. lets close this review and get outta here before sleeping yashie wakes up. ~tba-smile* funny. ok. update soon! bye! ~inuyasha-wakes up* koga? KOGAAAAAAAA!!!!!! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 01:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Any trips to China in the near future to look for a cure from a magic spring? 500 years later - Very tragic tale of sex changing hanyou who fall in spring.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhahaha, omg its great! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: lil6ter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 20:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Here is some quick advise (not flam…people tend to not get what they are). 1. put on a disclaimer or it could get taken down. Not matter what you position is on this topic, just do it for you own good. 2. try working more on the summary. Think of a story as an advertisement (as crude as that may seem). The title catches the attention, the summary draws them in, and the first chapter is a hook. Put a lot of importance on that stuff. The story seems to have a lot of potential and it can only thrive from what I told you. There is some other stuff that you can improve on, but lets save that for someone else or another time shall we?
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. this is why they wnted to talk in private. ~inu- so wat? ~sessh-laugh- inu screamed. LIKE a girl! ~inu-hits sessh- i am a girl! wait.. that didnt come out right.. ~sessh- laughs harder- and u admitted it! ~tba- ah. puberty. ~inu- so... wat did they tell me? ~tba- panics- uh... u see when a girl grows up. she ..................... uh......... gets married and moves away. see ya! thank you! -tries to run- ~sessh- grabbs her blouse- not so fast tba. ~tba- uh.. i didnt do it? ~sessh- were not gonna kill u. -mumbles- yet. ~tba- ... that makes me feel SOOOOOO much better ~sessh- im glad. ~tba- rolls eyez- can i go now? i got a doctor's appointment at 10. ~sessh- i thought u hated doctors. ~tba- yeah. i do. he sticks me. i shoot him. we have ALOT of fun. ~inu- and u wonder wat happens to them. ~tba- yea. weatever. love to chat. goodbye! -runs off-update soon k?! ~inu- i think she ditched us! ~sessh- oh gee. wat gave u that idea? ~both- runs after tba- (a scream is heard) ~tba- get off me u little- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. woder wat happens next. ~sessh- i could tell him er.. her to be my serveant. `tba- good one. as long as u dont think he's a she. `sessh- this sesshomaru isnt stupid like inuyasha. `tba-rrrigght.. ~sessh- u dare say this sesshomaru's lying? `inu- i like 4 u two idiots to stop fighting. ~tba- oh shut up. im fine nein called an idiot. so it dosnt bother me. ~sessh- is that a challange? ~inu- maybe. ~tba- calm down ladies.. if she wants 4 inu to be tricked by sessh. into thinking that she likes him and she's his servent when he's a girl. its fine with me.besides when inu gets bopped agaain he doesnt remember. im happy. ~sessh- u have a evil mind ~tba- lays back in chair- i try. ~inu- no wonder u named urself the black angel ~sessh- aKa death. ~tba-shrugs- wateve. update soon. bye! ~TBA~
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