| "Safe Sex" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 00:18 EST
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Fighting (wink) and Practicing (wink, wink)...Now that is the way to keep a relationship alive. I just hope he keeps the 'my bitch' reference to himself or there will be no more practice fighting for him. Very Hot and Very good as usual...keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Nowshin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 08:21 EDT
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Yay! I see you're continuing this fic :). Even though this chapter was less hardcore than the rest, it's so insanely funny and enjoyable as always. Keep 'em coming, darling! And by the way, I REALLY LOVE the plot of "Odalisque", but I don't think I'll be following it since I Ichigo's character there feels disturbing to me.:( *kicks self for not being able to enjoy such a great fic and for reviewing another story in here*
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 02:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahhah this chapter was awesome! I totally loved how you went into the other lives of Ichigo and Rukia's friends as they live in SS. And oh man the interaction with Ichigo and his father was just priceless! I couldn't stop laughing at Isshin's behavior XDD! Rukia torched Ichigo in a fun and cute way XD It was good and insightful. And since it seems with these one shots your writing about their lives in Soul Society, I wonder what Byakuya is like and what he thinks of their relationship. It be interesting to see you write about that next time you do one of these! Either way great job! =]
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 20:48 EDT
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Oh wow. I loved this! Like seriously, I loved the history, and they're in-character aaaaas always. =] I love it so much, I'm speechless. Awesome job!!^_^
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot, I loved this one as well! Sweet and sensual make up sex! How can it get any better? XDD! Very nice and sweet. Ichigo is very protective of his Rukia! I think you showcased their relationship really well in this chapter. Even through all the arguments and fights (though that characteristic of their relationship is what makes them a great couple XD) you showed that they still love each other! Very well done!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kukuku another good one! I really like these little one shots as you explore into their relationship in SS. It's very believable and you write it so well! And who can forget about the hot smut? Best damn lemonade I can read ever! XDDD!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDD This was a funny piece as well! I really like these one shots as you add a humorous touch to them. And of course your talent for smut make them even more delicious XDD!!! Just great!
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Reviewed By: kaoru_rukia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I love it like always! xD so funny xD, poor ichi! xD and I did miss you!! I hope you can continue soon!!!! I want more! xD well you take care, big kisses and a hug
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww this was a really sweet and sentimental piece! Even with the lack of smut, it was really great as you explored into the emotional aspect of their relationship. They both want to protect one another and are deeply concerned for each others safety and well being. You conveyed that very well in this one. Just splendid!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha that was actually quite the amusing chapter! I really enjoyed their interaction as they had their little quibble. And the ending was really funny as well! Ichigo going to the Captain's meeting with Rukia's brother. God knows, he'll be giving him weird looks XD! Once again nice job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFL! Man you really have a way with these little plots XDD! Even with the lack of smut, I still found it great! The interaction was all too funny and I actually snickered a few times because I can perfectly envision those scenarios perfectly. Ah jeez you really bring out the greatness in IchiRuki and stay true to their relationship. Very awesome!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha this one is great as well! I like how you used Icigo's lack of Kido abilities to make an interesting scenario with the two of them. The sex was great as well, but poor Ichigo got beat by Rukia XDD! Guess he need more practice XD! Another good one shot!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh a series of one shots. Look fun to read! Well I like the first one. Rukia making that remark about the red collar from the SS arc really made me laugh. A very humerous yet limey read! Nicely done!
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Reviewed By: alchemist1203 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 22:09 EDT
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I love the chapter! ♥♥♥ And I'm so glad you updated this story. Thank you!! :)
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 11:50 EDT
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Very cute! Loved how Rukia enjoyed getting Ichigo riled up. Loved how Isshin was so protective of Rukia. Loved the allusions to Ichigo and Rukia's sex life... and mostly, I really enjoyed your ideas on how everyone ended up... I totally see Chad leading a quiet life, and yeah, Karin wanting to join the 11th Squad. Please update this collection more!
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