| "Antique Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 23:20 CDT
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I do so enjoy this story, rich in descriptive goodness and wonderful humor! There is something however... malapropisms and typos. I have a proposition. I can beta read if you would like to avail yourselves of my services. I do not however beta lemons. I can be reached through my profile page where I will explain exactly what I do and send you the address i use for that purpose. The latest story I have been editing is 'Darkness Fades to Dawn' for the author kodiaqkitten, check it out. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 23:39 CDT
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haha I really liked this chapter!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice second chapter. I KNEW Inuyasha worked at that store. It is going to be fun having them work together along with Miroku and Sango. Since they both hate mornings so much maybe they can help each other get moving in the morning. Or maybe even compete against each other on who arrives on time the most. A good way for Inuyasha to notice Kagome is to have him watch Miroku make a few passes at her, that might stir his interest, no? Well I am looking forward to seeing what happens next and I am glad that the timing of my first review brought laughs, there isn't enough laughter in the world.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 16, 2008 19:01 CDT
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This story makes me want to go antiquing!!! I don't know as much as Kagome does in this story but I LOVE old stuff!!! I find antiques have much more charm than modern items and I love decorating with them, they just bring a sense of hominess that u can't get from modern stuff. Well update soon ok I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 16, 2008 19:01 CDT
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This story makes me want to go antiquing!!! I don't know as much as Kagome does in this story but I LOVE old stuff!!! I find antiques have much more charm than modern items and I love decorating with them, they just bring a sense of hominess that u can't get from modern stuff. Well update soon ok I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME??????????? YOU JUST CANT STOP THERE AND EXPECT ME TO WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WELL I WAS REALLY HAPPY THAT YOU GUYS FINALLY UPDATED. I WAS GETTING KINDA WORRIED THAT YOU GUYS HAD DROPPED THE STORY AND WOULD NOT CONTINUE.......................... WELL I HOPE THAT YOU GUYS UPDATE VERY VERY VERY SOON!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sounds like it is going to be a fun story. I am looking forward to seeing where it goes and I hope it lives up to its start. I have to say that I suspect that Inuyasha owns that antique store that Kagome made note of when passing. It should definitely be interesting if this is so. I do feel sorry for those two making such bad first impressions when they are destined to be together.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how this story has started , and would very much like to see where you will go with it
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is pretty good! this this will defiantly be an interesting read.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 03:22 CST
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YAYAYYAYAAYY good work so far!!!!!!!!!hope that you guys update this story fast!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehheheheh cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 00:24 CST
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ooo i can see that im going to get hooked ^^ cant wait to hear from you guys ^^
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Reviewed By: hans 359 On: March 03, 2008 00:17 CST
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wow... This was a really good first chapter though I would have liked to have heard more from Inuyasha. keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: March 02, 2008 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok first off I love the name of this story!!! Secondly I love the way her apartment sound!!! Thirdly Please update soon I've become addicted!!! Mwahahahaha!!! ~hands you both copies of this review~ Don't you just love reviews!!! LOL Ok Me & my random self are going to leave now!!! Byez Byez!!!
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Reviewed By: fudge On: March 02, 2008 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
inuyasha i sso mean! update soon
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 15:14 CST
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curious as to the kind of world... do youkai/hanyou/mononoke and persons with reiki i.e. miko/doushi exist in this world? if so do the 'normal' humans have a clue? . . . eloquently written and with a sense of humor. i shall eagerly anticipate more. ~ delighted, ginny
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