| "Bring Your Father to School Day" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: ssj3goku On: July 16, 2002 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I MAY BE A LITTLE LATE READING THIS FIC BUT.... HOW THE HELL DID TRUNKS AND GOTEN GET THERE? Ok i m sorry but this fic is way to confusing for me |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! You moved here from ff.net too? Uh...it's back up, though you probably knew that. Anyways, I can't wait until you get up to date here! |
Reviewed By: Piccolodork On: July 15, 2002 22:59 CDT
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ARG! i've been on a road trip w/ my uncle from tx to nj, adn for a whole week.... no computer!! it was torture! i sooo wanted to read the next chaps but i had no access.... but im back now so all is well in the world once again. well, mabye not in ur twisted story which is o-so-coolio. i love this story so much, keep it up and never stop! poor poor gohan...... and add some piccolo will ya!
LOVE YAS!
~Me |
Reviewed By: Frozenflower On: July 13, 2002 15:46 CDT
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Hey there--I don't know if anyone actually reads the reviews, but I can't upload, so I couldn't think of any other way to post a notice. I'm currently writing this at the library (where I can't upload!) because my computer is officially off its rocker. We can't figure out what's wrong with it. It's not the modem, it's not the netcard, and I'm going stir crazy! Anyway, I won't be posting until I'm back online again (if I live through the enforced abstinence) so if you guys want to read the chapters after this one, go to ff.net, where I have five more chapters posted. Hopefully I'll be back online soon, but I'll be writing in the meantime! See you, I need to savor my last ten minutes of library computer time! |
Reviewed By: Hirokono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, what can I say? IT WAS GREAT! I just read what you already had posted on ff.net and I can't wait for you to finish posting all the chapters here, and maybe even add some new ones (that haven't already been posted elswhere). |
Reviewed By: Nikkie On: July 12, 2002 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is the *most* fun I've ever had reading a fic. I cannot wait for the next chapter! A bit weird of an impression that Bardock and "the other guy" get of him at first, but maybe (or maybe not) they'll get to know him better... |
Reviewed By: Daimyo no Tamashii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome. I loved it. Every last bit. It was great. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahahahah oh my im dying here this is so hilarious ^^ now im off too chappy 3 heheh ^_^ |
Reviewed By: singasong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 08:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay, so did Dende make up evil Mirai Gohan or was that real? it wasn't very clear. Will he be back? I'm verrrrrry confoosed... |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Twi! You ARE my favorites list right now...lol I absolutely love this story, and I can not wait for the next chapter...
Jada |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien On: July 09, 2002 19:44 CDT
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hey...still going on strong...keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Veggiegirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Claps* BRAVO BRAVO ANCORE (sorry can't spell) GREAT fic i love can't wait for the next chapters |
Reviewed By: WeirdBluEyes On: July 07, 2002 04:10 CDT
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YES That is called an "evil cliffy!" If you do not update soon-or worse- if you do not finish this- I will be forced to kill you and let Lucas The Incredibly Good Looking Elf eat your remains.
I am sorry for the sudden out burst.
~ Lauren Rose |
Reviewed By: singasong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 21:46 CDT
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I am LOVING this! I hope you ahve a LOT more chapters, because frankly I don't want this to end! |
Reviewed By: Tokyo Rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 15:55 CDT
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ROFLMAO!!! This is sooooo funny! But as the chapters drag on, so does the story. It's hard to keep interest in it just because it's sooo long and it's almost the same things over and over again. But it is funny! |
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