| "Always Here, But Never Seen." Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Title: bds13
Reviewed By: Bds13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE DON'T!!! *tear drop* I read your stories all of the time sad i love them. (and i'm not lying) If anything, i know it might not mean alot to you, or mean anything at all, but could you please continue your stories? *puppy-dog-eyes* You don't have to if you don't want to but just remember that , even if no one else does, i love to read your stories. I really hope to see a new chapter soon, but if not i understand.~ your #1 fan bds13. P.S. Any one who write you bad reviews shouldn't be reading your stories anyway if they don't like it. It really makes no sense to read a story you don't like and then give it a bad review. Your stories are great. . . no. . WONDERFUL and i hope my review makes you feel better, even if you don't update your story.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update please please please:) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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why cut Sesshys hair T-T and hmm i dont know about him being a father..
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Title: HEY THANKS
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe fluffy smileing but don't you EVER cute his hair agian!!!! oh and thanks for the red x warning but i think the story should be put on young adult
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Reviewed By: Princess Stormcloud0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 19:35 CDT
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Could Jake and Josh be ferternal twins or something?
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 16:38 CDT
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omg this was hillarious! lol inuyasha fainted and stayed that way a little while! i think Sam should be fluffy's son or maybe the one closest to inuyasha:) OMG i just remembered Rin what happened to her? and what's up with the new gleam in sessy's eyes? please update soon:)
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 16:38 CDT
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omg this was hillarious! lol inuyasha fainted and stayed that way a little while! i think Sam should be fluffy's son or maybe the one closest to inuyasha:) OMG i just remembered Rin what happened to her? and what's up with the new gleam in sessy's eyes? please update soon:)
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 16:25 CDT
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sessshomaru and koga should totally enter the story:) i can't belive inuyasha fainted! please write more, this is one of ur best works! i love ur way of writing! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: eriste [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, do you realize that you have the perfect entrance for Kouga right now? Think about it, Inuyasha just fainted because Kags is pregnant, and guess who knocks on the door! Well, you get the picture. So you should totally add Kouga and Sesshoumaru into the story, they add a lot of potentially funny/dramatic scenes into the mix. Though I will leave how you put them in up to you, O Mighty Author!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess Stormcloud0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
He.....fainted?? LOL!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD haha InuYasha fainted! but if InuYasha didnt know b4 dat Kagome was pregent shouldnt he have? i mean InuYasha should have been able 2 smell dat shes pregent...owell ur story! i tottaly think u should make Sessy Sam's father. but dont bring Kouga in. oh and then the part when Kagome tells InuYasha 2 watch Sam or Josh and he says its the hand. and then Kagome says hes related 2 Miroku. u put me insted of he. yeah! ok well gr8 work! update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: DarkBeauty13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 21:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
please say there is more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess Stormcloud0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 02:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
FINALY they have sex!
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Luv the new chapter!!! Go Kags!!! Meow!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awww Kagome wants Inuyasha :P and oooo Kagome's dad is here!!
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