| "When They Choose You" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude! Excelente, hope to see more of this.
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Title: Well done
Reviewed By: Kojiyuko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very creative and clever. You have a unique style all your own and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter but you could use a slight amount of work on your spelling.
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Reviewed By: taylorj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good keep it up
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad story so far. Not the most descriptive of love scenes, but at least it wasn't the horrid trash a lot of lemons use where he just shoves it in there and jiggles around for a few seconds before instantly cumming and falling asleep. On the other hand I can't really guess where this story is going. Unless you plan on adding other females, or making Naruto found some new village because Leaf throws him out I can't understand where this might go. It seems like you resolved most the issues already.
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Reviewed By: Neo Tenro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 16:29 CST
Comment/Review:
hmm... how should I say this, a great Story so far and keep it up and i shall read, and maybe review
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