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"Misery Business" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Sonic 784  On: July 27, 2017 19:19 PDT
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s of me other Guest! Jan 17 c1 Guest HOLD IT RIGHT THERE! Once you start reading this, you cannot turn back. I’M NOT JOKING ABOUT THIS! KEEP ON READING! One day, Laura was surfing the internet. She was just looking at her favorite pages when all of a sudden a new tab opened up. She was confused, since she didn’t click on any link whatsoever. The tab didn’t show anything, just a white screen. When she tried to close the tab, nothing happened. She kept pressing the X to close it, but instead the tab turned to full size. Suddenly, the white screen of the tab turned completely black. It wasn’t only the tab screen that turned black, all the button and everything else on her screen did the same. Even her mouse disappeared off the screen. After a little while, she decided to turn her computer off because she simply thought it was broken. She made a big mistake. Out of nowhere, a full screen picture of her mother appeared on the black screen. As she looked at it, she could see that the pictures eyes slowly started b
 Reviewed By: Sonic 784  On: July 27, 2017 19:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
s of me other Guest! Jan 17 c1 Guest HOLD IT RIGHT THERE! Once you start reading this, you cannot turn back. I’M NOT JOKING ABOUT THIS! KEEP ON READING! One day, Laura was surfing the internet. She was just looking at her favorite pages when all of a sudden a new tab opened up. She was confused, since she didn’t click on any link whatsoever. The tab didn’t show anything, just a white screen. When she tried to close the tab, nothing happened. She kept pressing the X to close it, but instead the tab turned to full size. Suddenly, the white screen of the tab turned completely black. It wasn’t only the tab screen that turned black, all the button and everything else on her screen did the same. Even her mouse disappeared off the screen. After a little while, she decided to turn her computer off because she simply thought it was broken. She made a big mistake. Out of nowhere, a full screen picture of her mother appeared on the black screen. As she looked at it, she could see that the pictures eyes slowly started b
 Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 01, 2008 15:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
That was something else, I enjoyed the series myself. Though, maybe more of a reason why he finally go out with Akiha. Even so, maybe the flash backs did the trick, but not so much. Otherwise, cute.


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