| "Come into my world" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Adrienne Wheeler On: October 22, 2002 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEE! Yay, a Joey/Mai fic! Me happy! *glomps radiokitten2002* I'm writing a 25 years after fic. I get to be Joey and Mai's oldest daughter! Course they're divorced in the story, but something happens... Well, I love hentai, and I hope it happens soon! |
Reviewed By: The Real Unknown On: October 07, 2002 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool a joey/mai fic I them together plus it's a lemon so that's good in it's own right write more please |
Reviewed By: Princess Kitana On: October 01, 2002 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta countinue! I love Joey and Mai! Please update soon. PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Joey On: August 22, 2002 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your stile of writing and it was really fun to read. I think it was a great story and I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok by by,
Joey
Ps I am a GIRL! |
Reviewed By: Reaper On: August 11, 2002 08:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated it ten because i love the couple u used i think there should be much, much, much more of it!!! |
Reviewed By: crimson_medic On: July 21, 2002 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You hold the same ideals that I do, good story first and sex second |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 10:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story. the end of chapter 3 was funny. i hope mai and joey get together in the end. |
Reviewed By: mitsubachi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is sooo great. i hope you finish it soon. i'm dying to get to the christmas day part... hee hee. i love mai/ jounouchi!!!! please e-mail me when you've gotten the next part up!!! i swear i'll review again... and again... and again... and.... |
Reviewed By: KiKi On: July 11, 2002 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fan fic pleze write more !!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this storry was very good, in fact I enjoyed it. I know I am not the best an fixing my mistakes, but there were a tone of them in this fic. I am sorry. |
Reviewed By: ThwartedShanni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LONG LIVE JOUNOUCHI/MAI LOVE.. ::glomps:: kitten! Hey does this thing get Satellite Radio? |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! A Mai and Jounouchi fic!! Loving it already! Keep it up, write more!!!!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =) |
Reviewed By: Jena-su Aquila [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 19:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU LIKE JONOUCHI AND MAI!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!! *glomps RadioKitten-san* Thankyou,thankyou,thankyou,thankyou,thankyou,thankyou!!!!!!!!!!! E-mail me when you update! Please?? BakuChansGirl@hotmail.com ^___^ |
Reviewed By: radiokitten2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 00:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you all like it!There will be much more soon!
THe hentai will be soon too! |
Reviewed By: Starwkae321 On: October 30, 2002 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. Please write more. I'll be watching for updates. Good Job 0-0 |
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