| "Faith of Wicca" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: setobsessed On: July 18, 2002 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO SETO and ASUNA! write write ..........
thank you for accepting my request |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 11:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
o wow! i love ur story soo much... ti keeps gettingv better and better... but i have to say im jelous of Asunta! |
Reviewed By: seto On: July 14, 2002 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
here's a link that i think will help you with battle city...(unless you've already went there)
http://www.stormpages.com/edhrzic/Yugioh.htm |
Reviewed By: aklhdflkhd On: July 13, 2002 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic..........wow!......at least i know about malik(so fine)......you're so much like me.....i acted like a kid, even though i'm 16yrs old.....my friend thinks i'm crazy and weird, since i'm obsessed over an anime character.....GREAT JOB!.........keep writing...and also, i think that you should keep on adding chapters instead of making a new one...... |
Reviewed By: UltimaWitch89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 03:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really appreciate all of your comments!!! (YAY! GO SETO LOVERS!!!) And I would kindly suggest that a type of considerate 'thank you' from you guys (I mean ALL readers) would be to read chap. 15 onegai? THANK YOU!!! love you all!!! You have unmisery-ed my life a bit more! |
Reviewed By: wow! On: July 13, 2002 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! i love ch.14..... so many events........
your story was awesome.....always love a seto kaiba fic......hey,can you make one of those scene where she went completely crazy and somehow, seto love manage to bring her back? that's would be so romantic......anyway, when are you going to reveal a third person for your love triangle? |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 08:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better and better... write the next chapter sooon plz... i love this story! |
Reviewed By: setobsession On: July 12, 2002 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for your thought on my... something.
i really enjoy your story. |
Reviewed By: setobsession [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very great story. i also like the fact that u update it often.i only give you a 9 b/c i believe that there will always be room for improvement. you're doing a great job.keep it up.and last but not least GO KAIBA! |
Reviewed By: Anzu On: July 09, 2002 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
er...I have too many windows up so I can only read half of a chapter...I'll read more soon! ^^
keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: aaaaaaarrrrrrrghhhhhhhhh On: July 08, 2002 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SETO"S RULES.he's quiet,serious,hot,sexy,smart,caring....
i agree with you that joey is annoying. he always put his butt in where it doesn't belong.
and tea too.b/c she talks too much about friendship craps.
oops...i'm supposed to be mad at you for giving kaiba a girlfriend, not bashing joey and tea
KAIBA"S MINE!! MINE MINE MINE MINE! |
Reviewed By: Lady Kaiba On: July 06, 2002 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have a crush on Seto Kaiba too.^-^.btw i loved your fanfic *gives it 6 thumbs up* ^-^ |
Reviewed By: great On: July 06, 2002 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
ur story is awesome. and kaiba is so *sigh* .....
too bad he's real. |
Reviewed By: krista annahan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is excellent! keep up the good work
KAIBA RULES! |
Reviewed By: Kvaedi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 03:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very very Mary Sue. *sigh*
No, can't say I'm a Sue fan (I had no idea such creatures as Mary Sue FANS existed!), but I read it anyway. =P Which means that I didn't like it much, but that's not to say it's a bad story. Bit cliche, but actually pretty darn good, for what it is!
If I may make one suggestion, I would say not to put so many author's notes and disclaimers right in the middle of the story. You don't need to do that! They're distracting! Stick them at the beginning or the end if you're worried that someone will accuse you of plagiarism.
And maybe...you have enough OCs to fuel your own series. Why not do that? Then you could publish your work and make millions. (I get told that a lot. This is the obligatory "passing it on.")
Other than that, keep writing! =D |
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