| "The Art of The Business" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please write more~~ its soooo gooddd!!!!! i hope that itachi doesnt get dicovered even though what he's doing isnt right. and it would be so cool if itachi developed feelings for naruto and that sasuke found out about itachi kissing naruto♥ ^.^ lol but i hope to see another update soon please~!!! im really getting into the story ^___^
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i so loved it! at the beginning i thought well its must be good if she wrote it but it took me two paragraphs to read until i became interested~ but i so do not regret to have kept on reading~! it looks really good~! ^___^ i think this one might top 'brothers cant be trusted' please keep on writing~!!! ♥ it is sooo good!!!!
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! XD love it!!!!! *huggles you*
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 13:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting! =) I like the story a lot, and i love how Naruto wants to be a model! ^^ Good luck, keep writing!
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Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: ChoLei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should work on a few things in your writing, but nothing takes away from it. Normally I don't like AU's (I'm writing one though XD) but this one is good and it has a lot of potential! I'm interested now so please keep up the good work and update soon!!!!!
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