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Title: =D
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first of all naruto and sasuke are the best couple yet~ but anything you come up just ends up soo good =] ...shucks i wish my stories developed so well =P but theres a certain detail that i wish to see here. since sasuke is training naruto in modeling then i would like sasuke to do something kinky to naruto and make naruto believe that its a part of his training lol ohhh! and theres a certain couple that i have been dying to find a good yaoi story about~ i was thinking of writing one myself but since i havent finished my other stories then i cant proceed to start another one ...... kingdom hearts 2 riku and sora~! if you havent played the game then please play it because when i saw the ending i just couldnt stop thinking of how yaoi they acted even as best friends lol And on behalf of those lazy readers that dont like to review, thank you soo much for letting us know you havent forgotten about us =]
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Title: New Couple!
Reviewed By: Karafuru Omoi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 23:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
You should totally make an ItachiXNartuo fic!!! I love that couple!! Or a SasoriXDeidara!
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Title: lov it yet again
Reviewed By: babylov91 [offline] On: March 02, 2009 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok im doing an itachixnaruto fic so if you're thinking about it then i would gladly accept help instead of you writing another fic ^___^ . as to what i would like to see in this fic hmm how about itachi is about to do something to naruto but this time naruto is awake and sasuke sees it and stops it! and i want for sasuke to get involved with someone in his job again but just because he cant have naruto and naruto ends up seeing him and leaves crying lol i would love to see that and maybe leave a before he stops them or something i would also like to see is itachi with another pairing, like umm someone younger, and i want itachi to want naruto but never have him and i would like for itachi to become softer towards the end because of itachi making him a better person deep deep deep inside lol . ^__^ i'm crazy full of ideas cause i havent writin them down for my own fanfic. i know its too much and ofcourse you dont have to put everything, im just saying you are really good! i cant picture a bad chapter cause i havent seen one ever! i am a loyal reader cause i love your fanfics so i will always check when you do an update and possibly leave a review if im not in a rush. well thank you for another great episode~!! ^__^ hope to see another one again soon ♥
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Reviewed By: chichers On: December 01, 2008 23:12 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was a well done chapter. I really can't wait to read more. So please update soon. I want to know what Itachi is going to about his intended victim and what he is thinking about Naruto at the moment.
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Reviewed By: shinkamigrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! You must continue! I noticed a few spelling/grammar mistakes, if you need an editor I can take care of that for you. You can e-mail me at my registered address and we'll talk about it. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 01:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
From a long term fan, I'm looking forward to reading this
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Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started school to -_- and unfortunately I don't get time to write much. Specially with a job >_< . I appreciate you taking time out of your I'm sure busy schedule ^.^ ~so about the story I find it so kawaii that itachis cares!!! And can you please put a little bit of itachixnaruto and sasuke's jealousy. I so love seeing him get jealous ^^ and wheat oro going to come up? I love his personage and character =] and to top it off thank you so much for the update I can't wait to see another one!! ^___^
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
itachis relationship with kisame confuses me a little bit for some reason. I don't know why. But I find it so cute that he cares even if its the least bit.
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 11:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
"..........." naruto is a dumbass.
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Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: babylov91 (offline) On: May 28, 2008 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup definetely good~ ^.^ guudguud lol not enough excitement but alot of info which is also always good but I dong get it. Why would itachi have killed the father? Wat type if harm was he causing them? And was it only to sasuke and itachi or to the mother as well? Maybe its in there and I didn't catch on to it but I don't think you mentioned anything about the father harming the mom as well. And I want to see more sasunaru please ^__^ oh and what convention did you go to and what did you dress as? I wanna know >.< and how is narutos training going? I want to see more detail on it and sasuke in the modeling company and oro-sama ^.^ and is sasuke still with sakura? Omg I hope this isn't too much :( sorry if it is but I definetely like were the story is going~ ^o^ I hope I get my questions answered in due time~ loved the chapter~! :] I hope to see more soon!
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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please write more~~ its soooo gooddd!!!!! i hope that itachi doesnt get dicovered even though what he's doing isnt right. and it would be so cool if itachi developed feelings for naruto and that sasuke found out about itachi kissing naruto♥ ^.^ lol but i hope to see another update soon please~!!! im really getting into the story ^___^
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i so loved it! at the beginning i thought well its must be good if she wrote it but it took me two paragraphs to read until i became interested~ but i so do not regret to have kept on reading~! it looks really good~! ^___^ i think this one might top 'brothers cant be trusted' please keep on writing~!!! ♥ it is sooo good!!!!
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! XD love it!!!!! *huggles you*
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 13:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting! =) I like the story a lot, and i love how Naruto wants to be a model! ^^ Good luck, keep writing!
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Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: ChoLei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should work on a few things in your writing, but nothing takes away from it. Normally I don't like AU's (I'm writing one though XD) but this one is good and it has a lot of potential! I'm interested now so please keep up the good work and update soon!!!!!
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