| "Every Rose has its Thorn" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 17:04 CDT
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this is a great story so far, please update it soon
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Title: r they gay
Reviewed By: depression [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 16:48 CDT
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are they gay i mean... hiei isn't that type of guy
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Reviewed By: Bookish On: April 16, 2008 16:23 CDT
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I just wanted to say that your story's name is sort of already taken.... Nothing against the story itself, but the name has a counterpart on ffnet; i just thought you ought to know! It has an interesting plot, but I kind of want to know why Kagome didn't just threaten them with purification instead of letting them drag her off. Her actions make her seem very stupid and she seems to posses almost no foresight. Is she going to be stupid for the whole story, or did she just have to be stupid during this period of time for the plot to flow correctly?
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for the chapter *S*
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 12:50 CDT
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Very funny as usual. Keep up the good work. This chapter reminds me of the episode Sango got drunk and tried to kiss InuYasha (of course all the while saying she loved him) -Dusken
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 12:50 CDT
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Very funny as usual. Keep up the good work. This chapter reminds me of the episode Sango got drunk and tried to kiss InuYasha (of course all the while saying she loved him) -Dusken
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great i hope that you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 18:28 CDT
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funny as always and I loved the interaction between the characters. I must say your writing seems to have improved especially this chapter (not that it wasn't good before but you know what I mean) Keep writing! -Dusken
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 16:41 CDT
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Once again a funny chapter- I like how you made a point of Kagomes impact on the future, not too many people bother to do that. See ya next update! -Dusken_Dreamer
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 16:54 CDT
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Funny chapter! Glad to see an update so soon- normally the best authors take a damn long time to put up a chapter; its a refreshing change! Can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter. -Dusken_Dreamer
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definately off to an interesting start! Can't wait to see an update. -Dusken_Dreamer
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