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Reviewed By: FoxFirek On: May 21, 2008 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did enjoy this fan fiction quite a bit and it had a good plot. I do think that with more detail it would be a lot more exciting because as it stands everything is working out a little too perfectly with very little hardship and some important bits are being glossed over. It's wonderful when good things happen to a character but its better when all of the characters hard work is written down like how hard it must have been for Kagome to gain Sesshomaru's trust or the guilt she felt at making her friends grieve for her death. I do think this story has a lot of potential and that it has some very cute scenes that play out. Your spelling and grammar seem just fine and it was quite enjoyable thank you for posting and I hope you don't hate this review.
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Reviewed By: chibi hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story and can't wait to read more. Ja ne - chibi hikari ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice- although I've never been a fan of Kagome turning youkai, it makes the romance all the more sweet when its the forbidden love of a miko and demon.. but its your story and its still great. Kagome's finally going to modern Japan! cant wait to see what drama happens with that! -Dusken
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 23:21 EDT
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Its too bad ya had to make Inu a bad guy (sorta) and personaly I don't see how Kagome can be pure if the only reason she don't like Inu any more is because of who he loved and can't give up.....sigh*.....theres probably more to the story that I can't think of at the moment, took you too long to update...lol..Jk Jk......Soooooo Sesshy adopted Kagome as his sister that cute...XD....even cuter is Rin..XD.......the only thing I'm wandering now is How Hiei and the bond between every one will be when she goes home.....will it sever the link?....only time will tell.....well exsept for you cause its your story and you already know what your going to do *pout*...lol....update soon .................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 15:47 EDT
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please update soon. i want to know what happens when kagome goes home.
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Reviewed By: SesshysMate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm glad you didn't forget about this story!! Cause I love it! Hope you update all your other ones too. Until then Ja ne =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Shinyutou On: May 15, 2008 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the plot and how kick but you made kagome i can't wait for the next chapter cause im positive that it will be awesome
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Reviewed By: Mei_Koi On: May 06, 2008 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story so far... i hope u update soon... look foreward to it... keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic. i love it so far and cant wait to read the next chapter ^_^ update soon please
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Reviewed By: Thief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 03:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful.... please update asap!
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Reviewed By: hiei_is_gorgeous On: April 09, 2008 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic! :D please put the next chapter up soon!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice very nice.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 03:01 EDT
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OMG....am I lucky or what to find this story on the exsact same day that you post a new chapter.....oh happy days.....XD.....I like how this story is turning out I can't wait to see what else you write.....The Collar thing was to die for... really to great...hehe.......but Ummmmmmm I don't really want to die so update soon so I don't die from withdrawls.....K....XD...Jk...but seriously update ASAP............XD........X3............Meow...........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 05, 2008 19:59 EDT
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This is really great. Will Sesshomaru approve of Hiei? Wonder if Kagome will have a boy, girl, or perhaps both. Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome- so glad you got the right chapters uploaded. still can't wait to see what happens if Kagome returns to her own time; its bound to be interesting. hope to see an update on this story soon (though personally I love all your stories I favor this one the most) Oh and the rosary situation was priceless. Ja ne -Dusken
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