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| "Variable Thought-Space" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Kreyana On: May 10, 2012 03:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooooo. Its been a few years. Is there more to this? Its an interesting thing, and I'm wondering where its going. Or was? If you ever get more out, I'd love it if you could let me know via Fanfiction.net, if possible. This is a solid name I use, pretty much everywhere... | Reviewed By: HN On: March 20, 2010 02:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
Keep going with this! I want to see what happens. It's been a year...!
| Reviewed By: slasheroo On: May 09, 2008 04:41 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good work! I dont see any yaoi here though.. -cough- :P You got me curious, and I had to look up lucid dreaming, because I was wondering if you had made it up, but sure enough it's real. Seems interesting, I really want to try it :D Your story so far is good. You portray charcter connections and relationships pretty well as far as I can see, and you have a good knack with writing that some knack; the ability to keep a reader's interest. Cant wait for the next update! ;)
| Reviewed By: Fasha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 14:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! I know what you mean about it seeming longer on paper. :)Well I hope you update soon!!!
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