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Reviewed By: 0nimusha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 00:13 CDT
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This is a great read. Please hurry with next chapter.
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Title: pewterwings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 22:57 CDT
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Wow. What an awesome start.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! What a fabulous story you've got started! Poor Inu! I can just see him dragging his broken body to Kagome to be with her! Sooo many questions! What happened to Sango and Miroku? What happened in the Feudal Era? I love that you've made Kagome so strong. Too often she is just the hapless girl that Inuyasha has to protect. After fighting youki for so long she would have some impressive fighting skills. I'm so looking forward to seeing this story unfold! Thankyou for sharing your creativity!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG,OMG I just found you story today and just loveit please please update soon
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!! Love this one is much as your others; you truly have an amazing gift particularly on developing new plots which are unique without any of the typical cliche that plagues the fandom. BTW, I'm truly happy to read new stories from you, still I know you have a very busy life which made this new story more amazing. Thank you so much and specially for sharing it with us.
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Reviewed By: Rhonda On: March 31, 2008 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is WOW... This is an original plot line and I just enjoyed it so much. Youkai in the future??? InuYasha hurt so bad??? WHAT HAS HAPPENED???? Oh, the suspense... come on Inu, wake up already (haha). Just thought I would take a moment and tell you that I love your story and can't wait for your next installment. Rhonda
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 18:06 CDT
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it is difficult to even fathom dealing with life alone when you've depended on someone most of your life. i am worried for kagome's and yash's life and the safety of those who are depending on kagome's abilities and power. curious why youkai have come for the jewel now and not when she had shards... is the future changed somehow when yasha took the jewel through the well? is naraku still alive and if he is how did he allow such relatively strong youkai to survive without absorbing them? does yasha still hold the jewel? there are many more questions but i only want you to answer the relevant ones as they come up in the story. and such a wonderful and moving story, i was drawn in from the beginning and i shall be sitting on pins and needles as i wait for more. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 17:43 CDT
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I am absolutely loving this story so far. I don't know what else you got planned for your next chapter, but I'm sure it will be grand. I almost had tears a few times. The one thing I really did appreciate about your story was how strong you made Kagome. Usually, Inuyasha is always saving her, but this time the roles have been reversed and it's refreshing (go girl power!) And I also keep wondering... what in the heck happenend to Inuyasha? He must really trust Kagome to come all the way from the Feudal Era through the well into her home in his greatest time of need. Also, the family is just so wonderful in this story. Souta is so brave and Mama Higurashi is so motherly-sweet. Reminds me of my mommy *sigh*. Overall, a wonderful start to a story.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 17:05 CDT
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Wow! A very promising start! In too many stories where Kagome has to deal with a crisis in the modern era the author forgets about Kagome's family. It's really great to see them involved and supportive.
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: March 31, 2008 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was excellent!!! I loved how she was able to defend herself and him when needed. Great job!
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