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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 20:53 CST
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Lol "lets skip the formalities and cut to the sex" lmaoo wow Inu nice one!! lol I am soo loving this story right now and i really cant wait till the next update!!! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 21:25 CST
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i agree with kikyo, inuyasha was dumb. i wonder how he'll fix things with kagome. is inuyasha a halfdemon in this story?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that inuyasha & kagome are taking the step to make their friendship into more... funny that inuyasha asks kikyo for advice... seems that the date was going well until the end of course... what will inuyasha do now... what will kagome do?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo0o0o0o0o0o.... I want to read more..more..more!! hahaha.. I really like your story! There is so many characters involved its great.. and I love that Kikyo isnt a douche bag bitch lol.. even though she is lol! Im interested to know what happens with Kagome and Inu.. and Bank!! lol.. please update soon, pleaseee!!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. I like how Kagome is becoming a friend to Jakotsu and Bankotsu. Her relationship to Inuyasha is so funny, they act like a couple without any one seeming to notice. When is someone going to get a clue and who is going to be first? I doubt that it will be either Inuyasha or Kagome because they are too close to the subject. That leaves Miroku, Sango, Jakotsu, Bankotsu, Kikyou, Naraku or Sesshomaru (I am ignoring the original characters since they seem to have just small bit parts). I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 18:10 CDT
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i love when authors portray characters like jak as 'good guys'; he and kamatari from 'rurouni kenshin' make such fun friends (periphery characters) if depicted right (great dialog with him by the way, i love the repartee). . . poor yasha, he should say something instead of getting grumpy about it and loosing her completely eventually. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 16:12 CDT
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I love this story. It has a great originality to it a seems like it could really go far. Please UPDATE, as I dont know how long i can wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 15:02 CDT
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i wonder how long it will be before inuyasha looks at kagome and thinks of her...probably a while right now he isnt even looking at her.
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 18:39 CDT
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You've left me interested to see where this story will lead.....great writing!...update soon!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! I think it's totally great. If not a little ironic. My best friend from highschool, that hapens to be a guy, and I made a pact that if we weren't married by 30 that we would marry each other. Lmao! Keep up with the great work! I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 23:04 CDT
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i'm surprised that kagome didnt dump the food over kouga's head and storm out. this is so strange inuyasha is in a long term relationship with kikyo while living as best friends with kagome who's also friends with kikyo. so i wonder how the date with naraku will go and when does sesshomaru show up in the story? well i really like this story and am glad you update regularly.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update once again... glad that kagome turned down kouga... hope kagome doesn't meet up with naraku... seems that kikyo is interested in naraku with the way she was talking about him... then maybe she should go out with him instead since she broke up with inuyasha already... hope inuyasha & kagome realize they are good for each other... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 20:21 CDT
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from a variety of sources i have learned that in the insect/spider world the female predators are usually more deadly especially for the males of their species particularly during mating... a certain male mantis can't even perform as well sexually until he looses his head (the female relieves him of it, see: 'sexual cannibalism')... and that is all of the entomology i know. i wonder if takahashi-sama knows of that fact. . . any way if kikyo thinks naraku is so great why did she even suggest him to kagome if she knew she was going to dump yasha? then he could have been her next meal (sorry, i don't hate kikyo). . . i enjoyed the date but she should have handed the waitress her money and left instead of coming back to the table. . . yash/kag another case of not seeing the forest for the trees. ~ always a delight when a jedi turns back and your story is a delight, thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: libertyrjac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's rather sad... But not unexpected, I wonder where you'll go from here? I look foward to it, please write more.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like how it started... looking forward to the coming chapters... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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