Title: Irvin Z. Martinez Reviewed By:unfortunatesoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 00:05 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Sorry it's taken me so long to review this! This is truly one of my most favorite stories of yours....or one-shots. Whatever you choose to call it. I really enjoyed reading it....it really helped keep me occupied during my holiday in Mexico a few weeks back. The reason I didn't give you an all out 10 on the overall story was because the lemon ended way to quickly....not to sound unappreciative but most of your lemons are way to rushed.....if I may suggest how about trying a lemon scene that is not quite so rushed in your next story. Well hope that this review is helpful to you. Irvin Z. Martinez
