| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: Malou On: April 10, 2009 03:22 PDT
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If it's not made clear to you yet: please never stop writing these amazing stories! :) You have the ability to portray Bulma & Vegeta so well, it's unbelievable. And seriously, your writing is much better than most books of this genre that have been published! Anyway, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 20:26 PDT
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It's nice to see a bit of kindness between them, after all the emotional exhaustion they put eachother through...though I'm sure that will resume soon. Lovely chapter, and now that I'm fully caught up, I'll be waiting patiently for the next one.
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 22:04 PDT
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So I just finished chapter 14; I have been devouring this fic as fast as I can, but your chapters are so deliciously long that I'm not getting through it as fast as I thought I would! I just wanted to say how much I am loving the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta; the way they are both growing as they learn more about themselves through this relationship. I am glad to see that they are both beginning to see something beyond the twisted game of lust and control that they began with, even though neither is ready and willing to admit it. Can't wait to see what happens during their trip to space (I agree, with you, I LOVE the V/B in outer space fics) and am excitedly looking forward to reading the next few chapters before heading off to work tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 20:58 PDT
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Oh my god. Just finished chapter five. Holy shit. Ho SHIT was that ever good. I can't even describe how much I like this fic so far. This sick and twisted game of power between them; so perfect for those two. It's amazing. Utterly breathtaking.
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Reviewed By: Tempy On: April 06, 2009 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolutely fantastic story thus far. Once I began reading it, I could not bring myself to stop. You are a fabulous writer, and I'm very excited to read the next chapter. You have a new fan. =)
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Title: fabulous filler
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: April 04, 2009 13:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for inviting me to read the next chapter in your masterpiece. I beleive this was a great date for our couple. Even though Vegeta showed great power in this chapter it was a nice tranquil chapter especially compared to the last pain and pleasure event we just attended. I absolutely can not wait for the next chapter to get posted. Stop teasing us and post already. I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait.It's been a year since you started this project...please keep it going. Until next time, I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KurisutiKamae On: April 03, 2009 21:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely stellar. I love how you keep his personality dark and reserved but still manage to show his weakness for her. It is so realistic. He probably would never become all mushy and sweet. But this is perfect. He remains dark but weakens just enough around her that only she notices and that is more than enough for her. I am absolutely enthralled, I check for updates on this story more than my e-mail and that's a saying a lot. Keep up the greatt work.
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Title: Thoroughly Impressive!
Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: April 03, 2009 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Being a B/V fan of olde (well, for 10+ years now) and it's been years since I actually followed an ongoing fic, and it's also been years since I've actually reviewed something. Well, I rarely review fanfics unless they've really REALLY caught my attention, and yours is one of them. I just spent around 3 days (forsaking my research assignments) reading this from first chapter 'til now and I must say, you've got me thoroughly addicted. I could seriously not put this story down. You are an extremely eloquent writer, posessing the vocabulary of an erudite scholar. You ignore the cliches that have become standard characteristics within this genre (veteran B/V fans will know what I refer to xD). What caught my attention the most is how you've explored the 'darker' aspects of Bulma and Vegeta's torrid relationship using vivid imagery to illustrate what dwells deep within their psyches. It's like you made their emotions come alive through their actions. I'm not sure how to describe it exactly as I have a terrible time wording what I think; but I interpreted those chapters with eroticised sado-masochism (that were very cleverly written by the way) as the physical embodiment of their raging emotions: from simple wanton to violent lust and ultimately, a deep love. Haha, that's the hobby-psychoanalyst in me and that probably didn't make sense, and I might going about that all wrong lol xD. Ah well, point is I love it! Anyway, at the risk of this turning into a lengthy rant of praise (it already is), I will conclude by saying: You've renewed my addiction to B/V fanfiction - and I hold this story on par with the 'classics' of the genre, and to actual literature xD. I will now ardently watch this story for updates - and look forward to whatever you have in store for us. You've made a fan out of me! - Cheers, Unholy_Rage
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Reviewed By: kikyo Pyroana Sulane On: April 03, 2009 11:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give u an 1000 rating if i could but i can't unfortunately. This chapter was amazing! Your writing style is impeccable, flawless, and just beautiful. I haven't seen such a perfect description of Bulma and Vegeta's relationship in a looooong time!! I really really really hope you keep this story going, it's developing into a masterpiece (in my humble opinion :) ) The spin you've taken on the three years is perfect, I love it! >_< I just can't get enough of this story!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 12:37 PDT
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Absolutely gorgeous! I don't care if it's shorter than the others, the power that this one has is fantastic. I can't wait 'til next time. BTW, for some reason the status of this fic says 'completed'. I don't know why but it's a little confusing since it's obviously not.
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Title: you are my private idaho
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 08:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow........ I loooooved this chapter. It was soooo realistic! He loves her! She loves him! Omfg I can't wait to see what happens with them but im wondering about the brother of vegeta where is he?
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Reviewed By: Charm Sahara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 04:55 PDT
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wowow!! you had me addicted after the first couple of sentences! your writing style is so easy to read, that you seem to melt into the story and forget that your reading....
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 22:16 PDT
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im still waiting for the new chapter.....im having withdrawals and a rush of blood to the head.
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Title: Sweeeet!!!
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: March 01, 2009 08:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You always amaze me with your writing style. I didn't know you updated but I will just begin checking the site again regularly. I can't wait to see how Vegeta will handle Bulma from this point on. Hope some twisted punishment will come in the near future. That bathroom scene was off the chain. Please email if you find time ...janellab2k@yahoo.com. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I mean such sick. My grammer is terrible sometimes.
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