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| "Growing Up Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Dialogue FTW
Reviewed By: 9BaKa-NEKO9 On: April 16, 2008 04:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a ten on both your style of writing as well as on your grammar for this reason: Dialogue. It really does make all the difference. I try to make conversations a realistic as possible when I write, so it's very nice to see somebody who appreciates the use of apostrophes as much as I do. I don't think I could stress my point enough about how refreshing the dialogue was. As far as originality and plot goes, well, you know how it is. All of the ideas have already been taken and written about at least a dozen times. I always seem to have a problem with fanfictions set in Kagome's era that aren't AU or just about her family, though you seemed to pull it off rather well. All in all, it was entertaining, especially that bit about the peppermint block and "Otou Words." I'll be sure to look for you and comment on Eternal Destiny, most likely under the name I've used here (nix the nines). ^__^
| Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome. Its wonderful that Inuyasha is being sensible toward her when he needs it the most. Hope they can have more babies.
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very sweet. Funny, touching, painful. Nice mix, all tied into one another very well. Good job.
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