| "I am the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: west On: July 07, 2008 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No, vlad got awful close to the pups. good thing he didn't attack. Cool that western blood will rule over most of the eastern world though. Keep up the great work... ^_^
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Reviewed By: West On: July 01, 2008 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. Thank you for being timely with updates. it is soooo awsome to have quick gratification. I also love the love in this cahpter and i'm happy for how things turned out for everyone so far, but i'm sure happy times are short lived with the battle and all. Keep up the great work... ^_^
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Reviewed By: WEST On: June 30, 2008 03:52 CDT
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OMGOMGOMG thats FREAKING AWSOME! bout time she got a break and lucky her she gets two mates... I know you wrote alot recently but you haaaaave to update... like now... I'm diein here. Please ^_^ I kinda feel bad for Jin but he couldn't leave well enough alone and he can always find another anywho. Poor akemi too. How will here mate react? Will she come to terms with it all? I can't wait to see what that baby looks like. Beautiful i would imagine. hmmmm... that also means Asuna is giving birth to what? like her step brother in law kinda? at least there's no blood relation there so it's all good. Well any anywho, i think you get that i loved it all so keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 16:35 CDT
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I must say that I admire the way you are able to keep all these little subplots together and flowing. Masterfully done! Poor Asuna, just when she thinks she's got it all figured out and ready for action, in hops another mate!! simply delightful! Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: west On: June 25, 2008 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... my head is starting to spin with all the back and forth of time love and ... well all of it. Keep up the good work... ^_^
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Reviewed By: west On: June 19, 2008 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonder how she's going to help from the inside. Will she pretend to sucumb to him? How will naraku and sess interact? That's going to be fun...^_^
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Reviewed By: west On: June 17, 2008 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know i was so looking forward to this chapter i checked it like four times today hoping you would update. i hope the spiders will be restored to someof there former glory and i realy want to see how asuna is going to be with naraku and make it all better. keep up the great work and i'll be back to read it... ^_^
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Reviewed By: west On: June 16, 2008 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it damn it damn it! I want to read more! hehe. I love this new twist and reeeeaaally want o find out more. i can't wait till you update. oh and thanks for the info. very cool. keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: west On: June 12, 2008 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH no!. What happens now? and another thing... How do you write so much so fast? Thats alot of work. Any who good as always and i loved the new pup... ^_^
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Reviewed By: west On: June 09, 2008 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
crack... pure and simple. you are so on crack, but in a good way ^_^; Now what is she going to do? oh what a tangled web we weave... keep up thae good work... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG ive only read the first 4 chapters and Im already in love with ur story! It is so intoxicating
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 18:35 CDT
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wow...I have to say this is quite the fic!!! Is lemonaide supposed to boil??? lol...anyway, I love all the little complexities of this plot, and you seem to be able to keep up with them, which is a feat in and of itself!!! Keep up the wonderful storytelling!
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Reviewed By: west On: June 05, 2008 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH Ahhh ahhahhh AHHHHH! That was a freakin awsome end to the chapter. It really sucks that sheng is dead but they are all going to find out about NAraku HEHEHEHAHAhehehahaha!... ;;;clears throat;;; But you really suck you know, leaving a cliffy like that -_-, Keep up the good work and hope to see more from you soon... ^_~
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Reviewed By: west On: June 02, 2008 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolio, another couple chapters already... you are ambitious. hehe. I liked getting a look into sess and aug's background. I reeeeeaaallyy can't wait to see when everyone finds out about the naraku pup. This is gonna be great. keep up the good work... ^_^
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Reviewed By: west On: May 28, 2008 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, ok so i like never read stories based on ocs but i was drawn in by this one. and yeah, that took a while to read. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to the naraku thing and, well ...pretty much every thing, but i am most interested in the pup between asuna and naraku... hehe keep up the goo wrok... ^_^
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